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A Quest to the Ender - Part 2

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Posted 05/24/12 12:52:46 pm
05/24/12
As Tim smashed the window, cold air started to flow into the room, creating an unpleasant atmosphere. 

It turns out that the 'familiar' face was just the cleaner. Tim quickly gathered courage and popped out from behind the table he was hiding against.

"Tim, this is starting to happen to often, you should really tell your teacher" said the Cleaner as he recognized Tim. "Yeah, sorry about the window...I'll pay..." replied Tim, in a low and ashamed voice. The moment started to get slightly awkward as they stood before the broken window, with a chair leg somehow wedged inside of it.

"I should...go" Tim tried to ease off the tension. "Yeah you should, now go...I don't want to see you here again" replied the Cleaner, mopping up the floors and sighing.

As Tim walked down the dark and dusty corridor yet again, he thought to himself...'I just can't help it, I've always got that sense of adventure, that sense of freedom. Yet I'm stuck in this school when great adventures await me just around the corner'

He walked home, slightly hurried but ashamed and disappointed at the same time. He heart footsteps, rapid footsteps...increasing in pace behind him. He walked a little faster just to be on the safe side. But before he knew it he had arms wrapped around him, almost forcing him to choke...

"Don't...say...a...word" said the mysterious stranger.

"I hate my life" replied Tim

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You really dont read this that often...but ill post them anyway

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secretuser6
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August 5, 2012, 7:07 am

Once again, great great story, I love it, another diamond for you. Hopes there's more coming soon.

Spearhartt
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May 24, 2012, 11:44 am

Here's a comment, want more readers? Make it longer.

SilentAssassinX
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May 24, 2012, 12:47 pm

its short because its split into parts.


ill take that in mind and make the next part longer

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