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Death. (a poem) (Part 1 of collection: Emotions.)

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A colab poem I made with thatHoneyBadger

Original Poem

The very first draft, written by thatHoneyBadger.

Life may be short but is it worth the while,
Not very day we laugh and smile,
We will have days when we shout and cry,
Life is but celebrating birth and fearing to die.

We will never live without fearing demise,
Our lives are controlled by pathetic lies,
We love, we laugh, we cry, we despise
The World is full of desperate cries.

We rage against the dying of the light,
We struggle we scream hopeless we fight,
We try so hard but in despite,
We can't stop death;
We don't have the right.




Finished Poem:



Life is short but is it worth while?
It’s not every day we get to laugh and smile.
There are days when we shout and cry.
What is life, if not birth, and waiting to die?

Will we ever be free from fear, or demise?
For lives are controlled by powerful lies.
We can only see the world with our own eyes.
And all we can can see are desperate cries,
The world is full of terrible cries, to fix the terrible lies.

We rage against the dying light,
We struggle, scream, hopelessly fight.
We try so hard.
We can’t stop death.
We don't have the right.
CreditthatHoneyBadger
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01/22/2017 7:39 pm
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good times
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Beautiful -sniffle-
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09/18/2016 4:37 pm
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CHorse
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Meh. Life is nothing but perception; the whole idea of anybody not having the right to stop death isn't very good. There are no rights in this world made; we make them, death is natural, not because we don't have a right, but because it's natural. Otherwise, noice.
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09/18/2016 4:52 pm
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Travis
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You and your concepts of immortality
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09/18/2016 4:56 pm
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CHorse
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:I Sorry 'bout the whole chat thing.
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09/18/2016 8:21 pm
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Travis
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?
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09/18/2016 8:30 pm
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CHorse
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That whole rather pointless argument.
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09/18/2016 9:10 pm
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Travis
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It wasn't an argument? It was a civilized conversation, neither of us actually argued against each other
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09/17/2016 10:35 am
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Strauss
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:)
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