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Before I start, I'd like to thank you guys for my first Pop Reel! (Sure hope it isn't the last :D)
Hello guys! This is my poem. It kinda ends... A little over dramatic, but I think it's the book I just finished, it's ending was pretty much the main character dead. *Shrugs* Don't forget to leave a diamond if you liked!
Craft your pick,
You're ready to mine.
Wander into the cave,
Heedless of the sign.
After wandering for hours,
You've only found coal.
Then you take 5 steps,
And fall in a deep deep hole.
You're getting hungry,
And you crave for a meal.
A creeper sneaks up and explodes,
You cave yourself in as you wait to heal.
The deeper you go,
The more you go insane.
But it eases a little,
As you hear thunder and rain.
You hear a moan from behind,
And you run in total fright.
Then you spot something ahead,
Coming from lava is light.
As you enter the end of the gloom,
You see many ores hanging from the ceiling.
You see coal, iron, lapis, gold and redstone,
That's when you start to have a good feeling.
Although you've never seen so many colors/colours.
It is still missing light blue.
As you notice you can't just swim in lava,
You get an idea of what to do.
You jump from stone to stone,
As you approach the end of the pool.
You see a diamond back where you came from,
Seeing this, you realize you're such a fool.
You jump again and again,
And then you notice a zombie waiting for a duel.
You quickly fight and kill it.
And finally,
You are one jump from reaching the blue ore.
But your sprint doesn't work and you fall straight into the pool.
You appear back at your camp,
And From there you climb up a mountain to face your last dawn.
Then you jump off,
To never respawn.
Hello guys! This is my poem. It kinda ends... A little over dramatic, but I think it's the book I just finished, it's ending was pretty much the main character dead. *Shrugs* Don't forget to leave a diamond if you liked!
Diamond
Craft your pick,
You're ready to mine.
Wander into the cave,
Heedless of the sign.
After wandering for hours,
You've only found coal.
Then you take 5 steps,
And fall in a deep deep hole.
You're getting hungry,
And you crave for a meal.
A creeper sneaks up and explodes,
You cave yourself in as you wait to heal.
The deeper you go,
The more you go insane.
But it eases a little,
As you hear thunder and rain.
You hear a moan from behind,
And you run in total fright.
Then you spot something ahead,
Coming from lava is light.
As you enter the end of the gloom,
You see many ores hanging from the ceiling.
You see coal, iron, lapis, gold and redstone,
That's when you start to have a good feeling.
Although you've never seen so many colors/colours.
It is still missing light blue.
As you notice you can't just swim in lava,
You get an idea of what to do.
You jump from stone to stone,
As you approach the end of the pool.
You see a diamond back where you came from,
Seeing this, you realize you're such a fool.
You jump again and again,
And then you notice a zombie waiting for a duel.
You quickly fight and kill it.
And finally,
You are one jump from reaching the blue ore.
But your sprint doesn't work and you fall straight into the pool.
You appear back at your camp,
And From there you climb up a mountain to face your last dawn.
Then you jump off,
To never respawn.
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Harcore mode...
You need diamonds to prepare the fight with a Dragon...
But when you go deeper and deeper, the cave will be more and more dangerous.
I always like to play in harcore mode, and when i die my death is alwais weird:
-A skeleton shot me when i try to go over a chasm. (into a lava pool of course)
-At the nether a wither skeleton jumped behind me and tossed to depth..
-SsssSSss..."P:what?"...boom!..."P:Uh that was close..."...SsssSSSss.."P:?"...Boom!.."P:Where he come from? I almost died!"....BOOOM!