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FrostFang's Secret (scarstars revenge collaberation).

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DiamondScraper's Avatar DiamondScraper
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PROLOGUE


"is that you snowkit"yes come on let's go I smell something terrible and it's really buging me!"Where are we going"I was thinking out of camp"OUT OF CAMP are you serious I just want to go to sleep.Come on only this once let's go"they started out of the camp into the thick of the forest when an unexpected smell occured to them.they didn't dear turn around to see the dreaded creature!And that is when it hit them.They both realised what the smell finally was!


My warrior name is thornkit.


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07/19/2013 7:57 pm
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*I is inspired by thee awesome warrior cat bloggers* I see a future for this one, but don't forget what deltora said. I'll probably make my own due to all this inspiration flooding this head of mine.
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07/14/2013 11:01 pm
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DiamondScraper
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yeah i agree will be posting chapter 1 some time!!! xD
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07/12/2013 2:21 am
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deltoraquestgirl
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this is really good, just some tips though,
a prolouge is usually more then one paragraph long,
and very vague.
You only introduce the characters in a prolouge at the second paragraph, or in the end of the first :)
But it's still pretty awesome!
Diamond for u!
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07/09/2013 5:30 pm
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Lucky_Moon1
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Really needs work.
Mind me editing?
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07/09/2013 6:48 pm
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Lucky_Moon1
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I sent you a edited version.
I hope this helps!
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