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Herobrine kills all of the people of Castle NOTCH

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Posted 08/01/12 8:40:21 am , last updated: 10/16/12 8:28:38 am
08/01/12

From The Diary of Steve

Intro:

Hello to whoever is reading this just so you know this is the story of how Ben became “Herobrine”. Yes I know that in the diary of Herobrine it’s different than this, but I’m just making new Herobrine Origins.

Chapter one, The Hunter

I have been exploring this world for a hell of a long time and I’m probably going to go crazy if I don’t finish my stuff here soon. And, wait what’s this? A cave, but this is a very odd cave and WHAT THE FUU! AHHHHH!!! SSSSsssssss…… Boom Boom Boom!! Hey what are you doing here!? Get out of here, said a voice. You gonna get yourself freaking damn well killed out here! Uh, hi I’m Steve the explorer and hunter. Yeah hi I’m Ben and if this is the way you hunt here then you’re not gonna live a long time, now come! Follow me to the camp. A, a camp? Said I. Yes a freaking camp! We got to the camp and he stared introducing me to these guys like Honeydew and Captainsparkelz. So what are you doing in the PVP WOM? Said Jordan. PVP? WOM? Yes PVP means Player vs Player and WOM means World of Minecraft. Oh okay then. Said I. Now, “Steve” lemmie show you to your tent. Said Benjamin. 

Chapter two, A Battle that can’t be won

Go! Go! Go! Every one we’ve got company out here, move it! Horses rode with diamond sword knights while our stone swords were breaking. Come on Yuri, I mean Steve get up out of bed, we’ve got a battle to win! Who are these people? They are the knights of NOTCH, now move it! NOOOOoooooo!!!! Shouted Jordan as TryHardNinja fell to the floor, dead.  Jordan started to rage and went on a rampage. He hijacked a horse, stole a diamond sword, a diamond helmet and a diamond chest plate. This battle can’t be won! Even with raging Jordan we can’t win! Shouted Honeydew. We must fall back! Alright! You heard the dwarf! Fall back! We ran through the bushes as the NOTCH Horse riders sticked their swords in the air. There too fast! Shouted Honeydew. All of a sudden the Horse men surrounded us. Well, well, well. If it isn’t the yogscast? I’ve been trying to capture you more 13 years now. And as soon as I found were your camp was I couldn’t resist. NOTCH will be very happy with me when I have you tied up in chains bowing down to NOTCH. Said the Lead Horse man, Jeb. I will die before I bow down to NOTCH! Said Ben. We did nothing wrong, all we did was try to go on a journey to the farlands. Sure, sure, sure, well we don’t like people leaving The Castle of NOTCH. Now off we go to prison, LOLZ. Said Jeb.

Chapter three, A man will die before bowing

We were taken to a castle called “Castle NOTCH” and I honestly must say that my home castle, Castle Iliya is ten times better. When we stopped to get out of the carriage we saw archers with their arms pulled back pointing their bows at us so I knew these guys weren’t fooling around. We were taken to a dark place of the castle where we were to be tortured until we bowed down at his feet. I heard a deep voice say “Hmmm... take them to my personal office, I want to talk to them. Ben whispered into my ear saying “That sounds like the ungrateful king, NOTCH.Hmm… Yes Jeb I am very impressed with this, you shall be rewarded for this, but before I reward you, you must go and destroy BBQ Bay. I don’t know what BBQ Bay is and I don’t think I want to know. We were taken to the deepest part of the dungeon where NOTCH’s torcher office is. Now, all of you are to bow down to me and be my slaves, or Die! Said NOTCH. I’d die before I bow down to your stinking feet. Said ben. Hmm, well then we’ll see about that and… who are you?, He said pointing at me. Me? Yeah you! The ugly one! Um, I was saved from an exploading monster cave by Benjamin. Hmm… Creepers I guess. Right at that moment Benjie want up and started choking NOTCH with his chains. He had arrows flying to his back, but as he kept felling a urge to fall down he just resisted it. After a few minutes NOTCH fell to the floor, dead. Then the bravest archer came and stabbed him in the back. Ben fell to the floor on top of NOTCH and that’s when I died inside. I fell to the floor, crying. Just at that moment our chains broke and the castle started to fall apart. We heard a voice like Ben’s and it said “Run!, Run get out of here!”  Honeydew commanded us to run out of the castle. As we ran we saw loads of creepers come out of nowhere and as we escaped the castle it blew like castle Steve.  I then saw Ben rise up, only with only white eyes and he said “I am no longer Ben the hunter,  I am now Herobrine the ghost”. After that day I have been very grateful to everyone for that is what Ben taught me at castle NOTCH, giving his life up for his friends. We now live peacefully in Castle Iliya, with our strong campaign, the Yogscast.

Chapter four, This isn’t over yet

A few days after the destruction of castle I thought about it and remembered that Jeb was not in the castle when the castle fell to pieces so that meant, he was still alive. I went to Da_Iliya’s throne and told him my story about the horse man called Jeb. I said that he was sent out on a mission to raid a town called “BBQ Bay”. Da_Iliya stood up and said “You must take the yogscast with you! Now leave and don’t come back until you have the head of Jeb”! I was confused so I went to the Yogscast living quarters and asked them “What’s BBQ Bay?” BBQ Bay? BBQ Bay is a dock where many treasurers or pirates go to find treasure, why do you want to know? Oh well I heard NOTCH tell Jeb to go raid BBQ Bay. FTW! Let’s go! Now! Honeydew rushed out of the castle and commanded the door manager to open it. The manager did as he was told because with the look in his eye I think he has a fear of dwarfs. Let’s go! Lewis, take out your diamond sword and stick, we’ve got a bay to save! The horse went so fast I even got carriage sick, but as we were about to cross terror vale the whole carriage fell off and we all fell down. Quickly Steve, Lewis! We can’t stop we must run! We ran and ran and ran until we saw the beautiful bay of BBQ Bay. We ran up the docks and up to the stairs. Tin man! Call up the BBQ Bay defenses, you should be expecting a visit from Jeb! Shouted Honeydew. Hmm… I’ve always wanted to kill Jeb, but any way no time for fooling around every one to your battle stations! A rider with long, thick hair came running down. He said “Hold your fire, you will not kill me, this ends with me and Ben. Me? Said I. Yes you! But why me? What did I do? You, you are the reason I can’t raid BBQ Bay easily, and wait, shouldn’t you be in prison? You can’t beat my army or NOTCH’s army. Said Jeb. The whole of castle NOTCH is destroyed and NOTCH and his forces are dead! Hmmmm… You gonna die! Not likely. We went into a circle of BBQ Pirates were Jeb got of his horse, his enchanted diamond armor clinking. You can’t beat my enchanted diamond god sword, no way! He went and tried to stab me with his god sword, but I dodged it and had cut his arm off. AHHH!!! The pain! My right arm! Surrender now Jeb, without your right arm you can’t use your god sword. No way man! He jumped up in the air with his god sword in his left hand attempting to sever my neck, but I thought fast and hade cut his head off. I took his god armor and put it on. I threw my sword down and lifted up his sword and his head. BBQ Bay Celebrated as I lifted his head up in the air. That day David won. On the way back we stopped in terror vale to pick up our horse and have our carriage mended. We got back to castle Iliya where we had a great feast in honor of the death of NOTCH and Jeb. However that’s not all we had to worry about… HEROBRINE!! Even though he is a good guy it’s in his blood to kill and I think that in my next adventure he will be in it… Too be continued…

 

Thanks for reading!

 

 

Feeling sneaky? check out this sneak peek from part one!

 

 

Intro:

It’s been five years since the destruction of castle NOTCH and Jeb. The world has been brought back to peace, but we are never safe… HEROBRINE’s watching you!

Chapter one, We come in Peace

It’s the first of January, 1757 and what a lovely day. The birds are tweeting and the sun is rising. Never before have I seen such a beautiful… Hey! Hey! Steve! Stop daydreaming! Said Da_Iliya. We’ve got horse men coming at our castle, call up your troops. Come on Da it’s not 1756 it’s 1757!. Look Steve we don’t know if these are friendly or hostile forces so move it! Yes sir. I only said that because I didn’t want to get him mad at me and start fighting. The horse men approached the castle with their weapons put away. As I saw that they put away their swords I lowered my bow. We come in peace! Said the main horse man. Huh? Said Iliya. I am...

 

Coming soon Part 2!

 

 

 

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Credit:Da_Iliya

Update #5 : 10/16/2012 8:28:38 am10/16/12

impoved the main picture

Update #4 : 09/05/2012 1:10:38 pm9/05/12

Added sneak peek

Update #3 : 08/07/2012 5:16:19 am8/07/12

corrected grammer and spelling

Update #2 : 08/01/2012 10:28:33 am8/01/12

fixed title

Update #1 : 08/01/2012 8:49:51 am8/01/12

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Comments : 32

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Kaduu
Level 23
Expert Engineer
December 16, 2012, 12:09 am

Simmilary to my book.
,,The Twins''.

Mister_Iliya
Level 25
Expert Spelunker
December 16, 2012, 12:10 am

what?

Kaduu
Level 23
Expert Engineer
December 16, 2012, 12:16 am

It's a story with Steve and Herobrine.
It's a blog.But I like to say it's a book.

Mister_Iliya
Level 25
Expert Spelunker
December 16, 2012, 12:16 am

have you added a diamond to this blog yet?

Kaduu
Level 23
Expert Engineer
December 16, 2012, 12:17 am

Adding now.
Edit : Yea'.I Diamonded it.

Mister_Iliya
Level 25
Expert Spelunker
December 16, 2012, 12:19 am

Nw hand it over and no one gets hurt! A>:D

Kaduu
Level 23
Expert Engineer
December 16, 2012, 12:23 am

(lighting far away)
What did you just asked?
(me turns into a (giant) wolf)
Grllll...

Mister_Iliya
Level 25
Expert Spelunker
December 16, 2012, 12:26 am

rip out the teeth or the woman gets it!

Kaduu
Level 23
Expert Engineer
December 16, 2012, 12:28 am

(turns into a human back)
Uhh...That dosen't makes sense...
(turns into a eagle and flies on the window)

Mister_Iliya
Level 25
Expert Spelunker
December 16, 2012, 12:30 am

al right you asked for it!

*Slits your girlfriends throat*

Kaduu
Level 23
Expert Engineer
December 16, 2012, 12:34 am

I am alone.That was probably your girlfriend.
:))

Mister_Iliya
Level 25
Expert Spelunker
December 16, 2012, 12:36 am

but I don't have a girlfri... THAT WAS MY SISTER!!!

*Celebrates*

Come on! let's celebrate!

Kaduu
Level 23
Expert Engineer
December 16, 2012, 12:38 am

Um...

Knightsabers
Level 28
Expert Robot
October 16, 2012, 8:56 am

Awesome reference to MW3 in chapter 2!

CherryDolphin
Level 1
New Miner
October 16, 2012, 6:21 am

i used to be friends with herobrine until i took an arrow to the knee

cworrall
Level 9
Apprentice Warrior
September 7, 2012, 11:01 pm

Awesome. Someone should make a map about this

Mister_Iliya
Level 25
Expert Spelunker
September 8, 2012, 5:30 am

I Already Have! Please add a diamond for all my hard work and as for the map, it's my very own castle Iliya!

hill_man
Level 7
Apprentice Taco
September 7, 2012, 6:07 am

Good story but two mutch using yogscast :P diamond :)

darkrider5000
Level 12
Journeyman Cake
August 7, 2012, 5:07 am

...

Elyki_XD
Level 9
Apprentice Pokemon
October 18, 2012, 11:42 am

I agree.

Mister_Iliya
Level 25
Expert Spelunker
August 7, 2012, 6:49 am

?

BloodFall
Level 11
Journeyman Engineer
August 7, 2012, 1:47 am

The story was okay. Grammar could be worked on though. Keep writing and you'll get better ;)
I also happened to have made a short-story recently as well :D

Yodud333
Level 11
Journeyman Dragon
August 1, 2012, 9:23 am

Its an alright story, but you should really use speech marks and work on grammar.

Elyki_XD
Level 9
Apprentice Pokemon
October 18, 2012, 11:43 am

YES!
My thoughts exactly.

Mister_Iliya
Level 25
Expert Spelunker
August 1, 2012, 9:25 am

Meh, I'm only 10 :P

Yodud333
Level 11
Journeyman Dragon
August 1, 2012, 3:21 pm

In that case, immpressive, but still use speech marks :) Then people will think you 16 ;)

CaptianLolz
Level 8
Apprentice Architect
October 16, 2012, 4:31 am

Dude, how do you expect a ten year old too know that?

Yodud333
Level 11
Journeyman Dragon
October 21, 2012, 2:53 am

I used speech marks when I was ten. I used to love writing stories when I was ten, and used speech marks.

Mister_Iliya
Level 25
Expert Spelunker
November 2, 2012, 9:59 pm

in part three I'm adding speach marks! I wanted to add them in ma stories, but It'll be too confusing and long seeing how we only learn speach marks in the 5'th grade.

CaptianLolz
Level 8
Apprentice Architect
October 21, 2012, 3:12 am

stop judging people

Yodud333
Level 11
Journeyman Dragon
October 23, 2012, 6:39 am

Nobody is judging anyone. I merely suggested that he used speech marks in order to make the writing better. I didn't express any hate or judge anyone. It is called constructive critisism.

CaptianLolz
Level 8
Apprentice Architect
October 23, 2012, 10:19 pm

Dude, this is getting old, please just leave it.

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