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Heyyy... Welp this one kinda describes my life rn.. last night to be exact... I mean diamond this if you'd like, for support but... I just don't know anymore.... But anyways my grandfather passed away this morning so...

My ice was breaking, my reason slowly stepping upon it, weight too heavy to keep walking across it.
My ice was letting some water seep through, but the weight was letting off it, water going back through the cracks,
Moments passed, then the reason finally sank through, my water flowing like a volcano, not stopping, though I pleaded.
After the struggling reason stopped being as conscious, I stopped flowing, then went on for another while.
This period happened for what seemed like minutes, when they were really hours.

For a whole maybe 1-2 hours I sat crying in my room, pleading for my crying to stop.
I did not want anyone to hear, but the water would sometimes drown me, gasping for air.

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12/17/2016 7:33 pm
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That is sad! I'm so sorry for your loss!
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12/17/2016 7:35 pm
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pechee
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Oh ty .w. <3
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12/07/2016 9:20 pm
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Eli the Zeratoed
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...Holy Crap, man. That's like, so sad. I never usually get depression, but I do feel sympathy for those who do. I've actually made a lot of people on here feel better as their depression slowly diminishes, but let me tell you this: Life will get better for you. As you grow out of your gloomy teen phases (I'm 16, but I feel more adult actually... somewhat. :T), you'll start to see a light saying all hope is not lost, and the evils of depression will fade away with a swing of a sword of courage, eternal happiness, and childlike innocence. You'll soon realize that those dumb things that gave you depression won't matter, and your future will be bright, despite the struggles of bills, taxes, and all that. Don't give up now. I've got your back through and through. You have so much good things to live for, and people will become more caring and less evil. Sure there are some Doofuses, but that won't stop you from doing what you love. I leave you with this quote that I made up randomly:


"When Life Gives you Lemons, You take those lemons, make Lemonade out of them,

and give it to the person who gave you those Lemons in the First Place, and they will

forgive you for throwing them at you..." --Eli
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12/08/2016 8:53 am
Level 34 : Artisan Strawberry
pechee
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Hahaha x3 thanks, I'm not really going through the whole depression thing but, thanks anyways. I just feel bad for my grandmother, her whole life is going to change & she loved him greatly... But yeah,.. Thanks :D
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12/10/2016 8:32 pm
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Eli the Zeratoed
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Dang. That's pretty sad. I feel pretty bad for your Grandma... She must be going through a lot. D:

Besides that point, I'm glad you're not going through depression! I guess that whole thing I wrote was for not. :P (And no problem!)
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12/10/2016 9:22 pm
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pechee
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Meh if anyone else sees it, it wasn't just for nothing :3 Well, anyways ty
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