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Imm0rt41 Deviations: Waiting

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"Stay boy", my Master told me. We were at the entrance to a dark cave. I could see the monsters roaming deep inside, but they didn't dare venture out of the cave and into the sunlight. My Master needed to enter to retrieve materials that he could only find deep in the caves so that he could make armor and weapons for the night, as well as gather coal so that we could make torches to keep the night at bay, as our supply had run out yesterday.

My Master cautiously entered the cave. I saw the monsters turn to face him, they began to walk toward him, their desire to harm overwhelming their desire to live. I could tell he was quickly observing the area; finding the weak point of the mass of monsters heading for him. I saw him nod his head as he found it. He said "I'll be right back boy", and screamed a war cry as he charged for the thickening blob of monsters. I watched him beat them back, his sword swinging in all directions. Then it broke. He quickly drew his bow and became a storm of arrows. But it wasn't enough. The monsters converged on him, and brought him down like a helpless child.

My Master had told me to stay. And so I did. He had told me that he would be back, but he never was. Yet, he had to told me to stay. And so I stayed. I stayed, and waited for my Master to come out, give me some bones he had found like he always did, and bring me back home with him.

But he didn't. He never came out.
CreditThis story was originally written for my blog at http://thebasementnerd.blogspot.com/. If you wanna read my other stuff too, then go there. Its won't all be this deep though.
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05/27/2012 3:11 am
Level 17 : Journeyman Dragon
Mcblue2
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You really good on storys!
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05/27/2012 3:50 am
Level 41 : Master Explorer
Imm0rt41
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thanks, i need to start putting more out for more of my pictures
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05/26/2012 8:32 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Spelunker
Gawfield305
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Really good story
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05/25/2012 3:08 pm
Level 10 : Journeyman Farmer
ninja bob matrix
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*Tear tear* My dog did that...
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05/24/2012 7:26 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Dragon
Lord_Sauron_
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I'm really sad now.
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05/22/2012 12:30 am
Level 12 : Journeyman Narwhal
PiddyCraft
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BOLD STATEMENT!

Im guessing you got the idea of watching RED DOG, It's practically the same.
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05/25/2012 12:33 am
Level 12 : Journeyman Narwhal
PiddyCraft
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Also this has been copied from somewhere. Notice the White background behind the text. This happens when something is copied and pasted.
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05/27/2012 3:51 am
Level 41 : Master Explorer
Imm0rt41
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yes, from my BLOG, as stated in the credits. its also in a journal on my deviantart, username Imm0rt41
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05/24/2012 2:14 pm
Level 1 : New Explorer
Pmck6
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If you think that Red Dog is the same as this story then you must be either blind or stupid :p
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05/25/2012 12:32 am
Level 12 : Journeyman Narwhal
PiddyCraft
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Sigh face. It's Similar to red dog. Master tells his dog to stay. Dog stays. Master dies. Dog waits.
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