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In a world... Where everybody is truly equal.

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Travis's Avatar Travis
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In the United States Deceleration of Independence, there is a very famous line; ... and that all men are created equal. This is a dystopia-like story imagining that.



In my world, people who are different are killed. If you are born different, with different hair, or a different nose, or even different thoughts you will be killed. The normal people don’t know this, if they find out, they’ll be killed too, it’s how the society keeps everybody average. I was born different. Like the other children around me, i’m different from the world. In the outside world, everything is bland. Nobody is creative. Art, as you know it doesn’t exist. Everybody is average, but not a good average. They’re not creative, they’re not smart. The whole world stupid. Everywhere you look, grey. Every direction you turn your head, you hear the same monotone sounds. If you smell, you smell the dreams of past people. People from the past who were killed. If we step out of line in here, even completely cut off from the world, we’ll be killed early. My date for death is 5/6/2087. Two days from today. Sometimes I wish I wasn’t born different, I’d get to live, but it would also be a terrible, terrible life. It’s hard to imagine the outside. Everything is bland. Grey, pointless, the smell is nauseating the world, the sounds? nearly silent. Now that I think about it, I wouldn’t want to live in the outside world. Who wants to do the same thing as everybody else, over and over, and over for your whole life? Look at the same grey everywhere, smell that nauseating smell every second, of the day, always hearing silence how could you stand it? The lack of order in the outside world, too, nobody is in control, because they’re all equal. There’s no government, no order, and no inventions. They live in a simple pointless world, and they certainly aren’t satisfied with their life, sure they got world peace, but every other purpose of life was destroyed. It doesn’t really matter, though; if they think about it, they’ll be killed like me.



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09/17/2016 7:14 pm
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Voidest_
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omg ur poems are crying worthy. that was amazing
*crying of the beutifulness*
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09/17/2016 7:17 pm
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Travis
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Thanks! I try
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05/07/2016 9:49 am
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Katalisa
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reminds me of Ayn Rand's "Anthem"
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05/06/2016 2:31 pm
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Karrfis
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wonders who clicked on here for the blog, and who clicked on here for the fallout 3 cover image
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05/06/2016 12:36 pm
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karma police
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-Reads & Reads It Again- Omg Yah Got Art Dude,Yah Got Writin' Art .3.
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05/06/2016 12:38 pm
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Travis
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Aww, thanks
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05/06/2016 10:02 am
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titchy9
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OK It is really good though
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05/06/2016 9:41 am
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titchy9
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the people who kill will be above others
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05/06/2016 9:59 am
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Travis
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The title's a little misleading. Some super powerful people control the world, but only interfere with different people, to kill them.
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05/06/2016 9:40 am
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titchy9
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Thats brilliant only one problem
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