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Minecraft Poem (Attempt)

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Level 37 : Artisan Creeper Hugger
Posted 03/08/12 3:28:29 pm
03/08/12
Ok, I'll try a poem. First try. Hope you like.

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Spawning in a newly formed land.
Not a single item in your hand.
You go out searching for trees and supplies.
It will soon be night, you don't want to die.

You gather the wood, for supplies and tools,
Without them, you'd be a fool.
The animals are out, and making a sound,
Not a single monster to be found.

You build a house in a flat spot.
Truely a brilliant plot.
The ground is good for farming, 
And the sea breeze is calming.

The House is built, and secure against attack,
The Night begins and you watch your back.
With supplies from before, you make a bed,
A place to lie your weary head. 

The Morning comes, the sun shining bright, 
You went through the dark without a Fight.
Outside the world looks fine, 
There is a scent, of fresh pine.

You look out at the day, 
And you say,
"What a wonderful world!"

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Fin. Hoped you like, please give diamonds if you did.


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(AVE(N)GER)
Level 50
Grandmaster Pirate
May 3, 2012, 4:53 am

and than you hear the sound of  creeper...
and your heart sinks deep.. er..

.. and than u restart.. the story/poem again 

yerh .. .. thats embarrassing.. but cool poem :P
well done :D

Supershadowdan12
Retired Moderator
Level 37
Artisan Creeper Hugger
March 10, 2012, 4:38 am

hehe

Animatrix
Site Moderator
Level 8
Apprentice Goblin
March 10, 2012, 3:45 am

Gah, your poem's in the reel for 3 days, mine was in for about 3 hours ><

You deserve it, though.

Sim0n0id
Level 38
Artisan Artist
March 10, 2012, 3:07 am

I thought the texture pack was DrawnCraft. -.- Love the poem BTW

tex12347
Level 25
Expert Creeper Hugger
March 10, 2012, 1:28 am

lukyzade's right

papertazer
Level 55
Grandmaster Modder
March 9, 2012, 7:16 pm

i loved it!, however, why, i dont know.. but in todays world poems should not really rhyme anymore.. they should be free verse.. i dont know why, its like a rule, but still, it was amazing!.. +1 diamond for you!

coolh02
Level 20
Expert Cake
March 9, 2012, 2:07 pm

i like it! im giving you a diamond!

lukyzade
Level 46
Master Guard
March 9, 2012, 11:31 am

Would make a better rap.

tyson5125
Level 22
Expert Ninja
March 9, 2012, 4:17 pm

then make one XD

Timos153
Level 51
Grandmaster Artist
March 9, 2012, 11:17 am

Haha nice! :) Diamond for you! :P

Waystreet
Level 57
Grandmaster Hero
March 9, 2012, 10:15 am

Diamond - Check!
Subscrive - Check!

Supershadowdan12
Retired Moderator
Level 37
Artisan Creeper Hugger
March 9, 2012, 11:34 am

I... Think. You're my 100th sub... WOOHOOO

Crazy_RobotThing
Level 8
Apprentice Narwhal
March 9, 2012, 9:41 am

its great :D

yoavsnake
Level 30
Artisan Pixel Painter
March 9, 2012, 8:51 am

:D

Supershadowdan12
Retired Moderator
Level 37
Artisan Creeper Hugger
March 9, 2012, 8:05 am

Back on blog page? Niccee

Mushashiex
Level 18
Journeyman Engineer
March 9, 2012, 6:47 am

I actually read this to the tune of J*zz in My Pants.

Tedster
Level 14
Journeyman Warrior
March 9, 2012, 6:06 am

This has inspired me to make my own.

Supershadowdan12
Retired Moderator
Level 37
Artisan Creeper Hugger
March 9, 2012, 6:08 am

Good. I like to inspire art.

MrFinder
Level 35
Artisan Cake
March 9, 2012, 12:01 am

Amazing! i know were to look when i need a poem from now on! :P

neoncube123
Level 47
Master Pixel Puncher
March 8, 2012, 9:53 pm

awesome daimond for u :)

atimeforglory
Level 14
Journeyman Mountaineer
March 8, 2012, 6:32 pm

I like the poem, well done.


Oh, and does anyone know the texture pack used in the picture?

Robzero
Level 25
Expert Dragonborn
March 8, 2012, 4:18 pm

Meh good try, its ok

Super_Killer
Level 1
New Miner
March 8, 2012, 2:25 pm

not los of fantasy. just normal things in mine craft. but yeah its fine :/

jc3833
Level 16
Journeyman Cake
March 8, 2012, 2:05 pm

r u using ocd texture pack

Supershadowdan12
Retired Moderator
Level 37
Artisan Creeper Hugger
March 8, 2012, 9:29 pm

Got the pic of google. I didn't take it.

shamoo479
Level 17
Journeyman Dragonborn
March 8, 2012, 12:24 pm

This is really awesome, but there are some rhythmic errors, but they could be fixed easily. This is really awesome though and you should right more diamond and favorite  

Animatrix
Site Moderator
Level 8
Apprentice Goblin
March 8, 2012, 10:49 am

See, Poetry is art too!

Supershadowdan12
Retired Moderator
Level 37
Artisan Creeper Hugger
March 8, 2012, 10:50 am

Appointed head of blogs, my friend. Check out the club.

Animatrix
Site Moderator
Level 8
Apprentice Goblin
March 8, 2012, 10:58 am

Me Gusta, I will.

prettywaters
Level 29
Expert Miner
March 8, 2012, 10:47 am

Coolios!

Supershadowdan12
Retired Moderator
Level 37
Artisan Creeper Hugger
March 8, 2012, 10:50 am

=D

prettywaters
Level 29
Expert Miner
March 8, 2012, 10:55 am

Your welcome!

Clui
Level 15
Journeyman Artist
March 8, 2012, 10:39 am

Heh time to sing when my dad goes >.> (dont want him to hear me XP)

Supershadowdan12
Retired Moderator
Level 37
Artisan Creeper Hugger
March 8, 2012, 10:42 am

XD

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