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I'm taking a grammer class so for my assignment i wrote about minecraft! :D. i got 94 out of 100 so i decided to post here. hope you enjoy :)
Searching for the most prized object in the video game (minecraft), I
had been digging every day in an ancient abandoned mineshaft for the
past week. On the eighth day of mining, I started out, like every other
day, by exploring new parts of my mine. After an hour of looking, I
came upon a lava pool. As I was looking for a way to get around the
lava, a diamond, resting on the edge of the pool, caught my eye. Its
stunning gleam was like the sun, shining luminously. My quest was
finished, but I still had to build a bridge to the diamond and mine it.
Once these tasks were completed, I lept off my chair for joy, suddenly,
I heard a hissing noise and icy shiver went down my back. The only
creature that makes that sound is a creeper ( a freighting green
creature that when near you explodes). Scared and worried of dying I
jumped stupidly into the lava losing all my items and tools that I had
collected. Luckily, no one was watching me, as my cheeks became red
with anger at the evil creeper. Since then, I have learned not to be
scared of scary creepers, and searching for valuable diamonds
continues to be my quest.
Searching for the most prized object in the video game (minecraft), I
had been digging every day in an ancient abandoned mineshaft for the
past week. On the eighth day of mining, I started out, like every other
day, by exploring new parts of my mine. After an hour of looking, I
came upon a lava pool. As I was looking for a way to get around the
lava, a diamond, resting on the edge of the pool, caught my eye. Its
stunning gleam was like the sun, shining luminously. My quest was
finished, but I still had to build a bridge to the diamond and mine it.
Once these tasks were completed, I lept off my chair for joy, suddenly,
I heard a hissing noise and icy shiver went down my back. The only
creature that makes that sound is a creeper ( a freighting green
creature that when near you explodes). Scared and worried of dying I
jumped stupidly into the lava losing all my items and tools that I had
collected. Luckily, no one was watching me, as my cheeks became red
with anger at the evil creeper. Since then, I have learned not to be
scared of scary creepers, and searching for valuable diamonds
continues to be my quest.
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