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Original Poem- Herobrine

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(It says He's Watching)

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avatar BrookeG2106
Level 14 : Journeyman Scribe
Posted 06/25/12 1:06:51 am
06/25/12
The sun is getting lower,
the lighting getting dim
i start to really pannick,
then i see him.
A figure in the distance,
looking just like me,
but with eyes shining as bright as the sun,
i fear, he may not be glee
i try to comunicate
be he wont respond
he wont move a muscle
of that spot, he's rather fond
in one moment
he suddenly disapears
then i recollect myself
and am dragged back to my fears
the zombies, skelly's, creepers
the spiders and their jockeys,
their comunicating sounds,
all sound like mockings.
I run to my house
and shut the door behind me
but when i turn around,
his eyes are there, so blindning...
Hope you liked it :)

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Drwolfe777
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September 8, 2012, 11:19 pm

Interesting poem :D You earned yourself a sub

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BrookeG2106
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September 10, 2012, 9:33 pm

Oh thanks (^o^)/
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Snurf_Goggler_1
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August 8, 2012, 2:52 pm

That's really good!
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BrookeG2106
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August 10, 2012, 12:23 am

Thanks! *BLUSHIES X3*
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supme101
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July 21, 2012, 6:09 pm

I was wondering if i could use this in a book i am trying to write ("The Herobrine in us"). I will give you credit and make you one of the people that the book is "for" (assuming that i do make it lol) please REPLY! i need both messages.
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BrookeG2106
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July 22, 2012, 12:43 am

sure ^~^ And you dont have to dedicate me, just make sure you leave credit though! :D
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Kendall_
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July 4, 2012, 1:29 am

Creepy... `~`
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superch00b
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June 30, 2012, 4:57 am

:o Great poem ^.^
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BrookeG2106
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June 30, 2012, 11:04 pm

Thanks ^-^
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superch00b
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June 30, 2012, 11:49 pm

:3
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18jcrone
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June 26, 2012, 7:25 am

This is an awesome poem you deserve a diamond!
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BrookeG2106
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June 26, 2012, 5:45 pm

Thanks a lot!
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18jcrone
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June 29, 2012, 9:08 am

Have you ever encountered Herobrine or not?
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BrookeG2106
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June 30, 2012, 1:51 am

(not sure whether i should be thankful or sad...Ill just say nuetral) Nuetrally, no i havent. But I have seen many videos about the encounters and such... (sorry for late reply :P)

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