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Paranoia ~poem (Pop Reel)

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SpowzyThePoet's Avatar SpowzyThePoet
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(This is a doodle from English class so it seems quite sloppy considering we had 10 mins of free writing for a word (Paranoid) so I hope you atleast like it hehe cause its not well done...usually i write poems in a couple days with well thought out lines unlike this one sooooo yeah :I here ya go)

Walking along the rocky trail,
slowly darkening.
The light fading, trapped,
pulling out his flash light, turning pale.

Looking in front of his eye sight,
a figure lurking.
Startled, he ran the other direction,
out of the trail of "eyes", shivering with fright.

Heading back to the car,
with a run of the engine.
Lights flashing while the shadowy figure stands,
as he drives reverse, turning around, driving far.

The shadow figure stood in front of the street,
with panic, he turns to the right lane.
drifting off the road and crashed into the tall pole, unconscious,
vision turning black, weak.

Waking up in the hospital,
beeping of the machine echoing.
A man walks into the room,
giving the news, wanting to know what he saw.

"I saw a figure, a shadowy figure!",
"What was it doing?" the doctor asked.
"It followed me!" the injured man said, giggling,
"It followed me! It followed me!" he said maniacally, hitting the ground.

The man quickly pulled out his phone,
calling the mental hospital.
"Nurses! Come now!" the man yelled,
as they run to the room, pinning the injured man down, the patient moan.

Picking the crazed man up to the mental hospital's ambulance,
with the stray jacket covering his injuries.
While they drive away,
the crazed man looks out the window, with a small glance.

Seeing the shadowy figure, with its glowing red eye,
coming towards him and into his sensitive heart.
Collapsing to the floor,
with his motionless body wry.

Eyes turning white,
blood dripping to the ground.
His body sprawled across the floor,
the face of fright.


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10/11/2015 4:50 am
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RedstoneMagic
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Very well written, compared to the things that are put out there and made overly popular because people consider it "art".

Enjoy a Diamond for the creativity!
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10/11/2015 12:33 pm
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SpowzyThePoet
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thank you! much appreciated!
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10/08/2015 2:19 am
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tobbestark
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So you say paranoid people are insane?
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10/08/2015 6:36 am
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SpowzyThePoet
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i wasnt trying to say that and im sorry if it seemed like that but i was only saying this particlular person had Schizophrenia and was trying to seem like he had a loss of sanity
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10/08/2015 10:20 am
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tobbestark
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But if he/she has schizophrenia, why is the poem called paranoia? Just wondering
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10/08/2015 10:59 am
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SpowzyThePoet
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Thats a good point. I thought mixing schizophrenia and paranoia together would be a good mix. The shadowy figure was just a hallucination, but i can see how the paranoia wouldn't make sense because its when you feel like someone is watching you (the shadowy figure) but usually when you feel like someone is watching you, you sometimes see a shadow that resembles a person but really were objects creating that shadow to make it look like a person...am I making any sense? I feel like I went no where with this. Usually schizophrenia can lead you insane, I don't know, I have no knowledge...so I added the whole crazy part cause I like a sense of action/dark mixed with my poems....I don't know if you understood this at all hehe but if not then idk what im saying
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