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The Mobs get smarter!- Short story
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Hey guys in just taking a shot at writing a story i hope you like pls dont hate:)
CHAPTER 1:
It was a long troubling day for Steve No diamonds No crops No anything. His health was running low because of the interference with a creeper as he was exiting the cave system. He felt like only half his heart was there. He had no energy. He couldn't sleep that night because of the monsters outside he could here them hissing and moaning all through the night. This was not the first time alot of other days he had to just wait for morning and the mobs to leave. Steve couldnt help but notice the sudden rise of monsters. Not to mention them finding his home. This was a surprise as steves house was in the mountains normally the monsters would give up half way up but now they seemed to have found a way up. They also have gotten alot stronger since steve could remember he often found himself runnning low on energy as he was fighting a zombie. Also they had found a way into steves house often they are found already at my door inside i made sure there was enough light but they keep managing to get in. It all made no sense to steve but all he could do was wait and see what was to come.Thank you for reading this i hope you liked it i was only using this as a trial at writing a sotry hoped you like and leave a diamond if you did
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blacnarf
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November 1, 2012, 8:26 pm
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Waskomsause
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July 28, 2012, 1:09 am
try to give more detail to the story what is the mountain like? is his house on top or on the side of it? what mobs was he fighting most of the time now? were the mobs in his house creepers spiders zombies or skeletons?
its all about the little things
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ozil98
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July 28, 2012, 1:53 am