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Plop! In went Branden Grant's fishing rod, hoping to catch a fish at some point. Attempt 31. Branden decided to give up, and put his rod to the side, standing up, his wet legs meeting the fresh air. Suddenly, a drop of water landed on the tip of his nose. Slowly, Branden looked up to the sky and was greeted by a gray cloud.
"Oh no," He mumbled as he looked in the direction of which he was heading. Waves. Very. Big. Waves. Heart thumping like mad, he grabbed his cat, Cappucino, and felt more rainfall onto the boat's floor. Without thinking, he attempted to open the windowless iron trapdoor to the Emergency Cabin. Locked. Where had he put the key? The thumps of his heart began to ring in his ears, panicking him more. Gradually, his head turned to the left, where Cappucino sat, licking her right paw.
"Cap... Please tell me you didn't--"
SMASH!

Light-headed and sick, Branden fluttered his eyes open. The world around him spun crazily. "Cappucino?" He grumbled, clutching his head for dear life. No meow. No reply. Scared, Grant scrambled to his feet and snapped his head to the left and the to the right, "CAPPUCINO?!" He screamed. His friend from the very beginning, his friend that he had had from his birth... Was gone. An ear-deafening wail left Branden's mouth, "Father was right! The storms were awful!"

And then suddenly.

An ear-splitting screech.
The ear-splitting screech of a cat.

"CAPPIE?" Grant breathed a sigh of relief, "YOU'RE OKAY!"

Cappucino nudged him, "What?" Branden whispered, annoyed.
"I think your cat was trying to say that there's a stranger." A feminine voice said, in a misty tone, "Alicia Fletcher, at your service, Creator."
"I beg your pardon? Did you say... Creator?" Branden stood up and looked at the lady, tall, broad.
"Brain-washed to be a human, destined to return to your home, Creator." Alicia nodded to him, "You found this island and made it your own. Look for yourself."
The island that looked like an ordinary tropical lone island... Was now the cramped island full of wonder. Even though the island was small, it held an active volcano; a waterfall in a curved shape, so when the sun shined, it created several rainbows; canopy tree borders, up to 1000 meters tall; big lakes and small lakes; and finally, a limestone temple the size of 10 football pitches.


"This is Udraiton. And these are its bewilderment wonders," Alicia raised her hand, "Follow me."

"This is the active volcano, you called it Mount Struwahm. It has tiny holes in it so that when it is ready to explode, lava spills out the holes, and is filtered into melted diamond liquid through the forcefield around it." Alicia explained as the pair stood on a small hill opposite the volcano.
"Mount what-what?" Branden raised an eyebrow, turning his still light-headed head to Alicia.
"Mount Stru-Wah-M." Alicia spelled it out for him, remaining her position, which was looking straight.
"Oh okay." The awkwardness rose between the two before Alicia broke the tension.
"Let's go to the waterfall, shall we?" Alicia smiled, taking out a small device with a small antenna on it, with a label across the top saying 'Quickstep'.
She took his hand and squeezed it, before pressing the blue button and in a flash, they were gone.

"This is the curved waterfall, named Drizirk Cascades. The rock is crooked so when it is a radiant day, the sun will reflect off the water, creating various, mini rainbows. Like today, though they're not that visible." Alicia bent her knees, putting an arm around Branden's neck and pointing to the faint rainbows.
"What happens to the water?" Branden said, curiously, noticing that as soon as the water hits the ground, it disappears.
"Ah, good question. The ground collects it and turns it into energy, to keep the island running." Alicia grinned, taking out the Quickstep again and pressing the lime button, "Let's go to your home."

They were stood in front of a colossal limestone temple, surrounded by guards.
"You haven't been home in a while, so we've been keeping it intact for you and doing your taxes." Alicia yawned, stretching her arms out.
"How long have I been gone for?" Branden whispered.
"214 years." She began to walk into the temple, "This is your home, Eashaweia Templ-"
CRACK. CRACK. BOOM!
"The volcano is active. It's noth- OUCH!" Alicia wailed, as a lava drop had landed on her arm, "Wha-"
CRACK. CRACK. BOOM!
"A-Alicia!" Branden screamed, lava poured onto his leg, burning it to smithereens.
"CREAT-"
CRACK. CRACK. BOOM!
"My leg! MY LEG!" Branden cried, tears streaming down his face, as he wobbled and fell to the ground.
"Stay calm... Stay calm..." Alicia fretted, falling to her knees by the almost-unconscious Branden.
CRACK. CRACK. BOOM!
"I'm sorry... I'm sorry, honey..." Alicia touched his face, her tears mixing with his.
"H-Honey...?"
CRACK. CRACK. BOOM!
"We were married." She smiled lightly, putting her arms around him, embracing him in a hug.
"That's why I felt this way about you..." Branden smirked.
CRACK. CRACK.
"I love you, Branden," Alicia muttered.
"I love you too, Alicia," Branden breathed.
And their lips met for one last lustful kiss.
BOOM!

Their island burned to a crisp. Everything was gone. Except for the love, Alicia and Branden shared for each other.
CreditMy mind. Thank you brain. xoxox
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04/14/2017 8:34 pm
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Livigaard
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that was so beautifle ending

idk how to speel that X3
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04/17/2017 6:38 am
Level 11 : Journeyman Zombie
charpuck
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Haha. Thanks!
Also, just to help you out there, 'beautiful'.
X3
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04/17/2017 3:20 pm
Level 43 : Master Engineer
Livigaard
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thanks
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04/10/2017 7:11 pm
Level 29 : Expert Blacksmith
striker107
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Why do volcanoes always destroy the island? I didn't see the ending coming, even though I'm usually pretty good at predicting that. Anyways a nice story overall.
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04/17/2017 6:37 am
Level 11 : Journeyman Zombie
charpuck
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I was literally going with whatever my guts said, so, you know. Anyways, thanks!
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