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Complete the game (W.I.P)

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Prologue

Do you ever wonder what happens after you complete a game. Well this is how you will find out. Now before we begin the main story I want to go back to the past to 1984. Super Mario Bros had been released just last year and I was super excited. I had just turned 10 and I got the game for my birthday. I got my Nintendo Entertainment System (or NES for the rest of the game) and popped the cartridge in. I beat it in about 6 months, as it was really hard at the time. After completing that game I went and bought Super Mario Bros 2 and it was, terrible! It was just a port of a Japanese game called Doki Doki Panic. And the characters were just replaced with Mario characters. Mario, Luigi, Peach and Toad. After that experience I never played a Mario NES game again… Until now.

Chapter 1: Day 1






Hi, my name is Derek. Recently I have been involved in weird stuff, and since yesterday, I have been really creeped out, look at this.

Day 1. 3:50 PM
It all started when I was looking for a game to play for my YouTube gaming channel. I was looking in my attic for games when I found my NES and the cartridge, the Super Mario Bros cartridge. “Nostalgia moment,” I chuckled, remembering the fun times. “I know! I’ll play this for my videos!”

I went downstairs and got my capture card. The capture card was already plugged into the TV though. “That’s weird,” I said “I left that on the dining room table.” However, I just dismissed it. I plugged the NES into the TV and popped the cartridge in. “Time for dinner!”
Called my wife.
“Fine!” I called back.

Day 1. 5:26 PM
“Hey guys, Miner Does Gaming here and today I will be playing Super Mario Bros for the NES. So let’s get right into it, shall we?” I asked my camera. “Ok, so let’s start the game up.” I started the game, there was no title screen. “That’s odd.” I said, as I sat there puzzled. “I’m pretty sure that there’s a title screen.” The game started. Mario looked weird, he looked like he did in Super Mario World. “That’s unusual, that’s the Super Mario World sprite! OK the Super Mario World game was on the SNES and the NES can’t even handle the amount of power the SNES can!” I was a bit creeped out by this and I considered turning off the console but I thought “NO! NO! You have to witness this!” But the problem was, I didn’t think that, I don’t know what said it. “Sorry guys, I have to go, just a little introduction to this strange game.”

Day 1. 6:23 PM
I was uploading the video to youtube when I was disturbed by a scream from my wife. I ran over to discover what had happened. Sprawled on the wall (in blood) was the letter M. My wife recalled nothing though, she couldn’t even see the M on the wall!

Day 1. 11:48 PM
Ok, by this point, I was officially creeped out. I turned on my computer, but it wouldn’t start. Then it popped up. The Glitch. “Joan!” I called “There’s a virus! I didn’t downlo-“
“Hello, Derek.” My PC said.
“Wha-wha-what?” I replied. Joan rushed in.
“What’s wrong Derek?” She asked.
“Oh, and hello, Joan.” The glitch said.
“Oh no… It can’t be…” Joan spluttered.
“WHAT?!” I screamed.
“Would you like to meet my henchmen?” The Glitch asked. Suddenly, in their classic forms, Mario, Link, Luigi, Kirby, Sonic, Samus, Steve, Peach, Captain Falcon, Ness and Lucas appeared on my screen. That was the last thing I saw for a month.

Chapter 2: Day 32

Please answer my call for help, because I need ideas.
The winner will get a free copy of the published book (before release) and a large role in the story, so get writing :)

Poll ended 12/17/2014 1:04 am.

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11/16/2014 1:45 pm
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the_blocktor
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So how do I get the book when its done?

Also, if I have any ideas, ill send them to you
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11/16/2014 4:36 am
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YAY
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11/16/2014 6:38 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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Lol.

Click to reveal
np
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11/16/2014 3:29 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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The winner is...




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the_blocktor highlight this spoiler
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11/15/2014 8:24 pm
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the_blocktor
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OH MY BUMP! CANT WAIT! can you send it in n email or some kind of e book?
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11/14/2014 12:34 pm
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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winner announced tomorrow, bump
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11/13/2014 3:34 am
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the_blocktor
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HOPE ITS ME! I love reading
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11/13/2014 3:33 am
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the_blocktor
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So who wins the copy of the book?
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11/13/2014 3:33 am
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the_blocktor
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11/12/2014 2:09 pm
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the_blocktor
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Good idea... Maybe this could be set in the future?
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11/09/2014 10:25 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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bumped bumpedy bumpedy bump
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11/07/2014 4:18 am
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jjcyalater
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I picked the last option for fun.
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11/07/2014 3:32 pm
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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11/07/2014 2:57 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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You're getting tired of this now, aren't you? bump
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11/04/2014 1:58 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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bump
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11/02/2014 4:15 am
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Colonellooo
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I wouldn't attempt trying to publish this. Every company will turn you down for one reason. This story is based about copyrighted games and characters. Nintendo would sue you and the publishing company for everything you have if you earned even a cent off of it.
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11/02/2014 4:18 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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I know that the characters are copyrighted but this is a base/draft, the characters are going to be changed before I actually attempt to publish it.
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11/02/2014 3:50 am
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thegreensniper
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Good plotline, but the grammar and general lack of detail even it out.

Meh.
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11/02/2014 4:16 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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It's still a very high W.I.P, and this is still my draft of the story, I just want to find opinions. I know it doesn't look like a draft but it is just the beginning chapter.
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11/02/2014 3:23 am
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cakeface
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Do you know who you are going to publish it with?

Bit of a silly question but I am planning to write books as a job when I am a bit older.
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11/02/2014 3:16 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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bump
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10/31/2014 2:35 am
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-TheGrimCreeper-
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Stop bumping for God's sake...

Bump.
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10/31/2014 2:23 am
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AshuriRed
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The letter M in walls, it's Super Mario Sunshine all over again!
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10/31/2014 4:16 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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Lol
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10/31/2014 2:11 am
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the_blocktor
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bumpety bump bump BUMP!
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10/30/2014 7:29 pm
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the_blocktor
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Love the story line... why don't you do a chapter sharing job with another writer. get a basic plot synopsis and find another character to share the "protagonist status" more effective if its a girl.

Finish one chapter, send that chapter to the second writer, get her/him to write another chapter about what happens after that but from their perspective. that way you have a mixed viewpoint, then get them to send it back, then repeat.

The enemy is called 'the glitch'
She was created by a hacker to destroy all games as it was 'destroying humanity'

you and joan AKA. JoanOfDarkGaming( the female protagonist) are hired by the FBI or the CIA to enter the game, complete it and defeat the glitch once and for all...
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10/31/2014 4:25 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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That.. is... a... good... idea.
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10/31/2014 3:07 pm
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the_blocktor
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thankyou... I am currently writing a doctor who movie script so I know a little about writing creatively( its a fan film BTW)
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10/30/2014 7:52 am
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Find Them Creepers
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Is out supposed to be written
Like poetry?
Because
It's written
Like this.
I think
It's good
Though.


Well, very few parts are written that way
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10/30/2014 10:23 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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It was copied and pasted and it just came out like that, I don't know why.
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10/30/2014 4:34 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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bumpedy bumpedy bump
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10/25/2014 2:06 pm
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TheOcelotSpawner
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Perhaps you should team up with a fellow writer like me to help write it
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10/26/2014 1:05 pm
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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Perhaps. I'll think about it. Thanks!
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10/30/2014 5:14 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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I thought, and I think that I should!
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10/25/2014 1:18 pm
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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bump, contest winner is still up for grabs, since I've had no feedback yet! I need ideas!
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10/22/2014 1:29 am
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bumpety bump
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10/22/2014 1:27 am
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_Chocolate_Papyrus_
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bump
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10/19/2014 2:23 pm
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Bump
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