Planet Minecraft

@Theta, Damn boy, accepted.
@Gray, If you're going to write out your character's description, please make it longer than a single line.

Fixed my errors, can you check it again?

@Theta, Damn boy, accepted.
@Gray, If you're going to write out your character's description, please make it longer than a single line.

Fixed my errors, can you check it again?

Your dialogue section is just one run-on sentence. Denied.

Oops sorry, added periods, I'm playing inFAMOUS and typing at the same time, it's hard to focus.

'm In Florida now. Condo has worse wifi than the hotel in Macon did...

Sorry for long period of inactivity. Computer broke! Anyways, MAH APP!

Those "Things"
"Name": Formerly Chris Vain. Prefers to call himself "Daw," but most people call him "The thing that throws explosive flesh."
Dialogue: Daw walked in the narrow hallway. Something peaked his interest. "A human?" he said to himself, while looking for any escape routes. Daw picked up some flesh of one of his dead "Children" and threw it at the man. It exploded, and Daw ran over, and began to eat his flesh.
Backstory: Daw was never a monster. He was a normal person, like you and me, but he had troubles. His name was Chris Vain. He was born in a small town. He lived a somewhat normal life. Working for a major corporation, getting in the occasional fight, everything was normal until he got sick. He went to the doctor and, after doing some tests, they told him he had cancer. He didn't have much time to live, but he heard of the people who found a cure, and applied for their program. He was given the cure, but it didn't go as planned. All he remembered was a striking pain, surging through out his body.

He looked at what they did to him. He was a monster. His teeth sharp, his skin pale, but he still had some humanity left in him. People then tried to turn him into a weapon, but he grew weak from these tests. He was slowly dying. He saw that he wasn't alone. Much more monsters were undergoing the same test. He didn't want to do anymore "Tests," and he gathered all of his strength, and ripped the chains off and he ran. He was attacked, but he grabbed one of the humans, and dug his claw into his stomach. He through the body, and it exploded. After clearing the facility, he sat there. Waiting for more people to arrive.
Abilities: Able to throw explosive flesh at people. These aren't deadly, but are more focused around the concussion. Able to infect, but unlike other monsters, he can control who he infects. Can speak, although most of it is butchered. His claws are also acidic.
Appearance: Just look below

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Anything else? Muggles all around me, they be acting like they drunk!

"Name": Heckler, the loose tongued corrupted monster thing.

Dialogue: Heckler grinned in hunger, his long and giant tongue trailing down his chest and abdomen. Seeing a small human girl, who seemed to be running away from one of the weaker monsters, he swiftly climbed a building, his long claws clicking against the stone in a hurry.

Now ontop of the moderately large building, he laid down and whipped his head backwards, than forwards, his tongue stretching to disgusting limits as it wrapped against the little girl's torso harshly, more than likely breaking a few bones. ''Your mine now, weakling!'' he cackled insanely, swinging his tongue back towards the building, the little girl crashing infront of his prone body. ''No...please!'' she cried out in fear and pain, but Heckler didn't heed her calls. He wrapped his tongue around her like a snake wrapping around his victim, and swallowed her in one gulp, the little girls body not showing in his physical form...

Backstory: Heckler grew up as a healthy, fit man. He loved taking calm walks on the beach and eating snow cones. Than, it happened. He had just gotten a date, with a girl called Miranda. They were doing what he loved to do best-walking on the beach, shoes off and enjoying the sights. Suddenly, an armored van swerved up to the side of the road, nearest to the beach. Armored officials came rushing out, pushing his date back and grabbing Heckler. The man tried to escape their grasp, kicking and screaming with rage. The army man, grabbed him by the neck and choked him 'till he went unconcious. They dragged him towards the armored van, the on-lookers staring in shock.

Heckler woke up in a clean-looking lab, strapped to a pure white bed. He hazily looked around, trying to remember how he got here. He woke up fully with a gasp, remembering the army officials taking him into a van. They must have drove him here! He frowned and tested the straps, noting with sadness their stability. He looked at the door with shock as a scientist walked in, two military officers by his side.

''The hell man! Let me go!'', Heckler roared, struggling against his bindings. The steel cords sliced harshly against his skins, making him gasp in pain. ''Oh...your awake...'',the scientist said in a silky voice, slowly walking to Heckler's side. ''I thought you was going to be asleep for a while...'' he smirked, taking a syringe out of his lab coat. ''Well...this will only hurt...ALOT!'' he suddenly screamed, stabbing the syringe into Heckler, blood squirting, mixing with the metallic green of the serum.

''No...please.'' Heckler muttered as his eyes closed. ''Why...me?!'' he screamed as his world went black, stopping his struggling. When he woke up...he was different. He promised to take revenge on the military...the scientist...on all humans!

Abilities: Heckler's very snake-like, it showing in his appearance. He can throw his tongue to unimaginary limits., though how far it goes, the thinner and weaker it gets. He can wrap his tongue around the victim, and use that for gripping. The mucus on his tongue can infect, but it randomly does, but he honestly doesn't care. He can talk, but it's mostly hissing, and in a light, raspy voice that's hard to hear.

Appearance:

Anything else? Muggles...Y U NO USE MAGIC?

*cracks knuckles* Lets do this.
"Name": 'Tiny Tim' Previously Timothy Jones

Dialogue: Tim, looked around the rubble filled hallway. "Good to be free." He muttered as he cracked his knuckles.He remembered back to when he had been 'cured'. His life had been so good before. Tim looked down at the limp body of a scientist. "You will pay!" He yelled angrily, slamming his huge fists down on the body. Roaring angrily, he charged through the halls, looking for a way out.

Backstory: Little Timmy Jones had a great start to his life. He made a lot of friends in school, and his rich doctor parents got him anything he wanted. Life was going his way. Until his 6th birthday. He was having a blast with his friends at Chuck E. Cheeses, just being a happy little 6 year old, until the news came. On his birthday, little Timmy Jones was diagnosed with cancer. His parents decided not to tell Timmy, knowing that it would break his heart, However, when Timmy's parents were told that there was a cure, they jumped upon the opportunity. They were not told that the results weren't guaranteed. When the serum was tested on Timmy, he was completely fine, except for him often complaining about pain in his stomach. Then, he transformed into... whatever he was. Retaining only a tiny portion of his previous memory, he realized one thing. He would probably never be able to live with his family again, so naturally, as any good giant monster thing would do, he vowed revenge.

Abilities:Being big and strong... ._.

Appearance: Girl look at that body!

Anything else?Aw yeah, Hufflepuff know whats up, let me see you gettin' nasty with yo pumkin juice cup, with yo pumpkin juice cup, with you pumpkin juice cup, with these muggles all around me, they be actin like they drunk! Dang. You already used that.

.......I need to know how to write a backstory for a corrupted monster...so Thunder...post your backstory soon!!!

Tis easy. Stick with me kid, I'll show you the ropes. *looks at your app* Or, in your case, the long tongues that we use as ropes here in the wonderful place we call earth.

Were we experimented on and turned into monsters? Can we leave the lab and how far can we wander?

Beats me, I don't know.

Ultra...your useless to me. XD