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by jackattack4000 » 6/19/2012

"Name": Ranaka

Dialogue: Ranaka roared as a human stabbed her with a spear. "Don't touch me!" she roared. Ranaka picked him up, and threw him into a nearby building. The human fell to the ground, dead. To make sure he was dead, she burned him to ashes.

Backstory: Ranaka was born into a very rich family. Her parents spoiled her, giving her whatever she wanted. Though one day she got something she didn't want. She got cancer. Her parents payed a lot of money to get her cured, and surprisingly she was. She continued to live her life for a few more years. Then it came back, much stronger this time. Ranaka's parents were desperate now. They gave her to this strange man in the hospital, and he experimented on her with a new chemical which was meant to cure her. It was miscalculated, and accidentally turned her into a literal monster. The man never gave Ranaka back, he made her into a monster. To avoid getting sued, he told her parents that she died from the cancer. Ranaka started to mutate even further, giving her the ability to glide and breathe fire. Ranaka was trapped in the lab for years, but made a great plan to escape. As much as she was spoiled, she was clever. She literally broke out of the wall, and now roams around.

Abilities: She can glide and breathe fire. But she gets easily distracted, and can't touch water.

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Anything else? Muggles are non-beilievers. Just sayian.
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by Nron » 6/19/2012

... Denied.

There is no explanation of why it is able to fly or breath fire. The body certaintly doesn't support that ability.
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by jackattack4000 » 6/19/2012

Edited it.
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by Nron » 6/19/2012

Denied again.

Backstory conflicts with the story itself. You're character is outside the labs, something that doesn't make sense.
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by Clue » 6/19/2012

Personally, I don't think Brink is an acceptor until his name is put upon the wall of acceptance, for it to be official.

Name: Subject Delta
Dialogue: Delta crawled along the ceiling, observing the two unsuspecting scientists walked down the hallway, their revolvers pointed either way. They looked all across the hallway, forward, sideways, and even backwards. But not up. Humans rarely looked up. They passed him, and when they weren't looking, he swung down, and stabbed them both. They never look up . . . .
Backstory: Malakotav was always sickly when he was a child, and honestly expected to die of a disease of sorts. So when he got cancer, it was no huge surprise. He had been living in a rundown cottage in the woods of South Carolina, and struggled to get along, and was forced to do some risky things. Him getting a lethal disease was inevitable. He had even decided to live by himself, just in case it was contagious. It was a total shock when the guy who came by to give him food, came by to give him food. He called the hospital, and took Malakotav there to be diagnosed. It was confirmed that he had lethal stages of cancer. The Doctor left the room, and called The Number. In the middle of the night, Malakotav was spirited away to a laboratory, in a pure white room, and strapped to a cold bed. He woke up drowsy, with a large machine over his chest. The machine injected him thrice, and then doctors came to observe the results. His body became stronger, and his cancer cells slowly turned into normal cells. The doctors rejoiced, and left the room. He was the third subject who had been taken in. He was the first one to not turn into a horrible monster. The doctors came again the next day, and injected him with a different set of needles, and his cancer-turned-normal cells slowly became stronger. The doctors left. In the night, his cancer-normal cells became stronger and stronger, and eventually mutated him. He became a humanoid monster, and was vicious. He hated everything suddenly. The doctors came in unsuspecting of his new stage, foolish on their success. They never left. He broke out of his bonds, and went into the observatory room. Inside it was a crate with "Subject Restraint Devices". Within, he found a variety of weaponry, including fours sword-hooks. Which could be attached and removed easily from people with no hands, using the device next to the container. He attached them to his limbs, and crawled out of the room. He was a weapon of stealthy destruction. He hid in the ducts, waiting for the inevitable chaos. It would come soon . . . . . .
Abilities: Has sabers for arms and legs, so obviously is very good at stabbing people. He can go into "spider mode" which allows him to move much faster on all four legs, but is very susceptible to bullet fire. He can walk up walls and on the ceiling by stabbing his saber in the wall and using it as leverage. He can also launch himself forward at fast speeds, and of course swing down from the ceiling and jab people with his legs. He is incapable of speech, and uses screeches and moans as communication with other monsters, and has some sort of telepathy to communicate with humans.
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Anything else?: Eh, well, anything concerning my character has been described quite thoroughly, really, so not, not really. Muggles?
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by GinKurama » 6/19/2012

Well...I have a snake monster that can trap people with his tongue and drag them forward, eventually bringing them to his large mouth, where he proceeds to devour their flesh.

I totally didn't get the idea from L4D2
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by ThunderHooves » 6/19/2012

@Clue
Accepted. Maybe a mustache would suit that appearance.
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by jackattack4000 » 6/19/2012

@clue same with nron.
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by Nron » 6/19/2012

jackattack4000 wrote:@clue same with nron.



ThunderHooves wrote:Sorry for the long wait, I was sort of sleeping, and Black wasn't doing his job...

@Nron
Accepted, both of them, you can accept.
Aaaand yes. People (For the most part) will start outside.

@Brink_
Accepted. You can accept too!
Explosives would work pretty well, because the laboratory walls are so strong. Most of it is narrow hallways, leading to large, open labs.


Sorry?
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by GinKurama » 6/19/2012

...*cough*...
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by jackattack4000 » 6/19/2012

I know you can accept, but your name isn't on the list. Just sayain.
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by Clue » 6/19/2012

Clue wrote:Personally, I don't think Brink is an acceptor until his name is put upon the wall of acceptance, for it to be official.

Sorry, it seems you are confused, the wall of acceptance is located on OP lane.
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