Aether_Angel wrote:Your spelling is terrible, the backstory is too short, she needs a last name that's not (Evil high school student), my Grammar Nazi is being set off when I look at your application, you could have done this:SpoilerPut the freaking picture in a spoiler.
instead of this:
http://www.google.com.au/imgres?q=Evil+ ... /f/2012/06
Aether, I agree with all but the picture thing, I always have to link my people, my computer gives me grief. Someone needs to properly explain how to do it.