Planet Minecraft

This fan fiction is called FutureTW Chapter 1

Regan and her friends Marcus and Lachlan were sitting in Regan's apartment when suddenly a white flash and a grown man with a prickly chin appears. "Did you but drugs in my coffee again marcus cause I swear to god I" Regan said. "Not enough time you 3 now come on or else they'll come!" The man said. The man grabbed the three and pulled them out of the apartment. "Wait, who are you!" Lachy said "I'm you from the future lachlan!" Future lachy said. "WHAT?!" Regan, lachy and marcus said together. "I'm here to save the world in the past so that I can create a paradox so that the aliens in the future disappear!" Future lachy said. "Okay, one." Regan said. "That sounds stupi" "But it's true." FL interrupted. "You have to come with me. NOW HURRY." An explosion happened and the four were blow flowards. "What was that?!" Marcus said.

End of chapter 1

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Needs to be longer, even if that's a chapter. And I didn't follow it at all.

...The people's reaction was too casual and easygoing.

Thanks for the feedback, I'll re edit it.