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How does this build look? I want feed back

jeeperscreeper77's Avatar jeeperscreeper779/2/15 3:25 pm
12/23/2015 3:53 am
nymphaela's Avatar nymphaela
So I built this mine for a prison server and I want to know what i can improve on, I spent about 6 hours building it and I wasn't sure how it turned out. I like it, and the person I showed it to liked it.

Here is the picture:

http://i.imgur.com/cctzwe4.png
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12/23/2015 3:53 am
Level 38 : Artisan Princess
nymphaela
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You used a lot of patterns over and over again, the pallete is alright, but i would suggest removing some parts to keep it more clean, like dont use the same pattern over and over again ,aswell dont overdetail, try to keep some parts open x)
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12/23/2015 3:31 am
Level 42 : Master Mage
Pixel
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It looks way too repetitive. I like the style though.
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12/23/2015 3:28 am
Level 8 : Apprentice Skinner
Skywing890
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Pretty nice Room.
Can you add arches or make the place More Alive.
But pretty good work so far anyways...
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12/23/2015 2:19 am
Level 27 : Expert Dragonborn
Casseph
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The layout is to....squarish. The blocks and wall designs are a bit overused. Maybe a touch of cobblestone, stone, etc. would make it look more alive. Maybe change up the designs as it go ups higher.

The ceiling looks a bit too flat. Some more details, maybe even a dome? I think that some arches could make this look nice. I see that on the ceiling you added fences coming down with glow stone sticking at the end of it, It looks too simple.

This build is a good start.
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09/06/2015 3:15 pm
Level 61 : High Grandmaster Terraformer
Ivain
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Here's a couple of pointers. First, when using a grid, try to make either the horizontal or the vertical lines stand out more than the others. That way it looks less like a grid.

Second, for said grid, make the spaces larger. if a wall is 30x30, instead of making 6 grids of 5 by 5, make 3 grids of 10x10. This means you need less boxes, so it looks less repetitive
Third and last, make each gridbox a little different, try to connect them across the grid and take them outside it. Try to make people believe that there never was a grid, yourself included. Once you manage that, you can ignore the grid entirely and just stitch the content of the boxes into 1 big build.
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09/06/2015 3:06 pm
Level 66 : High Grandmaster Senpai
Stubbs1
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It's fine, but make it less "The same"
By that I mean; try to make variations of the blocks you use. It can get pretty annoying to look at over time if it's the same bright coloured blocks everywhere.

So I would recommend: Use a few other blocks such as Cobble, og Stonebrick, and then add a few darker blocks such as Spruce Wood, Stained_Clay, or Something that fits
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09/06/2015 2:46 pm
Level 13 : Journeyman Ranger
MattShadow_
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Pretty good!
You are very good at building!
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09/06/2015 2:45 pm
Level 23 : Expert Dolphin
EmeraldEclipse
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I love it! The only (minor) issue I have with it is that the build is kinda plain.
Maybe a little more variety with the blocks? Otherwise, it's awesome!
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09/06/2015 2:37 pm
Level 16 : Journeyman Architect
txg_
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i did think a lot of copy paste was used, nice patterns although rather repetitive but generally a nice build.
good job
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09/02/2015 3:43 pm
Level 2 : Apprentice Miner
jeeperscreeper77
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Thanks guys I can redo the floor, I kinda agree it does look like someone set it with /set (The only world edit I used was copy and pasting)
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09/02/2015 3:35 pm
Level 4 : Apprentice Explorer
Captain_Hd_
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Hey, not bad at all quite nice actually Keep it up
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09/02/2015 3:29 pm
Level 14 : Journeyman Dragon
dasrafa
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Good job dude! This is a very good build! The ground looks messy though, I think you shouldnt make it look like someone did just do //set (block,block,block,block,block)
But the walls and the part of the roof I cansee, which isnt that big though Is looking well!
The only tip I give you is making the floor less of a chaos, for the rest: Good work!
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