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9/4/2014 9:46 am
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Hello everyone!

I recently uploaded cover of Ed Sheeran's Lego House.
Link to a cover - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xeEzg8Npo_k
And I would like to know what you think about it.
Is it good? What should I improve? and things like that
But please,be kind,don't just hate me without reason,please.
I'm trying to get at least to 500 subscribers with making minecraft parodies,minecraft covers,original songs,and original songs covers.
Don't forget to leave a like if you like it,comment with something that will touch me ,and if you want to hear more of my songs please subscribe.

P.S. - You can tell me which song you want me to make cover of next,it can be original song,or minecraft parody
I'm thinking to make a cover of Ed Sheeran's - I'm a mess.

Have a nice day
- CreepyNinjaX
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09/04/2014 9:46 am
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08/14/2014 12:49 pm
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Dat low voice though...
And (No offense) But take this as something constructive.

[Before you read the stuff beneath: I'v been singing irl for 4 years with a Teacher so please don't just say: "You know Nothing!" Thanks]

Find a Music school and find a Sing Teacher because at: 00:30 your voice is going way too low then the Octaves playing in the background, and not far at 00:34 You can't really find the tone, and this is the last one I promise at 00:40 when your "Rap" begins. Rap isn't your style.

"But how can I do better?"

Well there is two solutions (Probably more)

Solutions
1: As I mentioned find a Music school and get with a Sing Teacher. The first year will most likely suck, but after 2 years you'll be amazing!

2: Find something with higher octaves and fewer notes. It might be a "Noob" trick but where do you think all the Stars start? Micheal Jackson for example.
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08/14/2014 5:41 pm
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I really want to go in Music school but it is too expensive,and I really live in country where everyone is poor.

Second solution - Like what?
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08/17/2014 6:12 am
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Second solution:
As I said find something with higher (Or lower) Octaves, but I see that you might not understand what Octaves are since you can't afford Music school, so I'll explain
Explanation
An: Octave is a tone. You can have a very low (Tone)Octave while you sing or a High (Tone)Octave.

Practice:
If you want to practice at home you should try to find a song that matches your voice. (For example: My voice is very close to: Breaking Benjamin - Rain) In "Rain" he sings in a Low (Tone)Octave which makes it easy to sing along. I would recommend slow songs without rapping or fast words if you are a beginner. "Rain" got both of those, It's slow and the text is easy to follow.


A third solution
The last solution is to learn to play Guitar or Piano (I recommend Guitar because you can get those cheap. It's best to start with one that has already been used. That will make the price lower then normally) I know that on You-tube you can find all different kind of beginner guides for both.

-"Why do I need to learn that when I want to sing?"

Because:
If you learn to play Guitar or Piano YOU are the controller. You control whether the (Tone)Octaves will be low or if the (Tone)Octaves will be High. This will make it easier for you to find your tone.
(For example: When I play guitar I usually need to play in the (Tone range: A range that tells you how high or how low you/the instrument needs to be/sing))Octave range of the E string (The biggest string on a Guitar)


I hope some of this will help you a little further I wish you luck!
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08/17/2014 4:13 pm
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Thanks for helping me,I really appreciate it.
But the problem is,I don't know notes,I don't know what song matches my voice range,I don't know how to even find my voice range because I don't know notes,when I hit which notes.
I have a guitar and piano.So I think I'm gonna try to learn how to play a guitar.
Thanks once again.
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08/18/2014 4:53 pm
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Always a pleasure to help other people If you need further help just PM me on PlanetMineCraft
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08/14/2014 12:43 pm
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Thats a really good cover!
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08/14/2014 5:38 pm
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Thank you !
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08/13/2014 8:30 am
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hmmm.... I'm not really good at this kind of stuff but it seems to me that the Take Back The Night you sang was like, a bit off tune. Maybe you should get the right tone first before practising. But don't take my opinions seriously, I'm bad at singing XD
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08/13/2014 1:17 pm
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Yeah,I know.That one is old tho.
I just need feedback on Lego House
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08/14/2014 7:19 am
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Well, I can't because I don't really like vocal songs. I prefer dun dun dun dun-style instrumental epic music XD
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08/14/2014 12:33 pm
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Oh xD Okay then
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08/13/2014 8:19 am
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Seems good, my voice is so "normal" damn puberty ruined my chances of singing. All that's left is the nba.
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08/13/2014 1:16 pm
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I think we all have a good voice for a singing,we just need to practice
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08/13/2014 7:58 am
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08/08/2014 3:17 pm
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You have a very monotone voice when it comes to this, If you really want to pursue trying to make good covers, take some classes on how to hit higher notes. and not sound so..bored. Plus, you are using an instrumental that was already made by a good friend of mine who to covered this song --> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kk-W6vzDwvo

All these factors make your version look much less proffesional and lazily made. I suggest taking some online classes, joining your school Choir or getting help from a friend who may know more about this type of thing.

-Rep
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08/08/2014 4:35 pm
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Yeah I know that my voice is monotone ,I'm trying to solve that.
I can't take any classes because I don't have money for it,that's too expensive.
You know Phantaboulous? He is my favourite YouTuber/Singer
And he allowed to use his instrumental as long as I give a credit in a description and I did that
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08/08/2014 9:03 pm
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Okay, My bad. I didn't see you gave him credit.
And yes, We met a year or two back.[/quote]

You're so lucky!
He is ignoring me when I say that I've made a cover of Lego House with his instrumentals [/quote]


I wouldn't call it lucky, As I met him as a person. Not a Youtuber. I think of him more of a friend that a internet identity.
And he is busy, he probably has seen it. Just hasn't responded
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08/08/2014 5:09 pm
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Okay, My bad. I didn't see you gave him credit.
And yes, We met a year or two back.
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08/09/2014 8:27 am
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You're so lucky!
He is ignoring me when I say that I've made a cover of Lego House with his instrumentals [/quote]


I wouldn't call it lucky, As I met him as a person. Not a Youtuber. I think of him more of a friend that a internet identity.
And he is busy, he probably has seen it. Just hasn't responded[/quote]

Well I would give everything to meet him.
I think he is just responding to a YouTubers who has a lot of subscribers.
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08/08/2014 5:33 pm
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You're so lucky!
He is ignoring me when I say that I've made a cover of Lego House with his instrumentals
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08/01/2014 8:15 am
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Thanks a lot !
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08/01/2014 8:15 am
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Doesn't look bad, maybe lift your voice up a bit, thats about it.

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08/01/2014 8:13 am
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Well that's what I did :/
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08/01/2014 8:01 am
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Please only bump your post once very 24 hours. Bump a post more than once every 24 hours again and the post will disappear.
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07/31/2014 7:30 am
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WoW Thanks!
That really gives me a will to continue doing songs
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07/30/2014 10:09 pm
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Thank you! Means a lot!
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07/30/2014 10:04 pm
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Nice cover!
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07/30/2014 9:32 pm
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CreepyNinjaXHello everyone!

I recently uploaded cover of Ed Sheeran's Lego House.
Link to a cover - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xeEzg8Npo_k
And I would like to know what you think about it.
Is it good? What should I improve? and things like that
But please,be kind,don't just hate me without reason,please.
I'm trying to get at least to 500 subscribers with making minecraft parodies,minecraft covers,original songs,and original songs covers.
Don't forget to leave a like if you like it,comment with something that will touch me ,and if you want to hear more of my songs please subscribe.

P.S. - You can tell me which song you want me to make cover of next,it can be original song,or minecraft parody
I'm thinking to make a cover of Ed Sheeran's - I'm a mess.

Have a nice day
- CreepyNinjaX


Awesome! I love it! Make more!!!


Thank you! That means a lot to me.
I will make more I just can't decide which song should I choose to make cover of.
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07/30/2014 9:21 pm
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CreepyNinjaXHello everyone!

I recently uploaded cover of Ed Sheeran's Lego House.
Link to a cover - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xeEzg8Npo_k
And I would like to know what you think about it.
Is it good? What should I improve? and things like that
But please,be kind,don't just hate me without reason,please.
I'm trying to get at least to 500 subscribers with making minecraft parodies,minecraft covers,original songs,and original songs covers.
Don't forget to leave a like if you like it,comment with something that will touch me ,and if you want to hear more of my songs please subscribe.

P.S. - You can tell me which song you want me to make cover of next,it can be original song,or minecraft parody
I'm thinking to make a cover of Ed Sheeran's - I'm a mess.

Have a nice day
- CreepyNinjaX


Awesome! I love it! Make more!!!
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