Planet Minecraft

Please reed and i wioul love some feed dack. thankyou

Day 1: I awake with no memory of what happened. as I stumble to my feet I feel the Corse sand in between my toes. As I scan the area around me I see no other people the only living thing I see are some cows and pigs. As I look up into the sky I see the sun fading into the darkness. As I scan the area one more time to see if I can find a shelter to take cover in for the night. As I find a cave I look in and find nothing, so I take shelter in it for the night.

Day 2: Last night I could barely sleep due to a consecutive clanking and mooning. At one point I even think I saw a large tall black figure in the dark night. It looked to be like a man. After that I finally got some sleep. As I awoke in the morning to a bright light in my eyes I see a chest with a note placed on it. As I walk over and open the chest I find a stone pick and a stone axe as I read the note is says. “Dear explorer if you find this note you should already see or heard the monsters outside. Take these tools to make a shelter to survive them. Good luck.” I place the note down and start to gather resources to build a shelter.

This is just the start of a story I would wish to right please give me some feedback on what you think so I can improve on it thank you for reading the start of my story.

It's good alot of mystery to it:)

anything to improve it?

Improve on spelling.

i know spelling is a weakness of mine that is why i have an IEP

any more pepole want to give me feed back?