<> Coalition for Better Roleplay <>

Roleplaying is a large part of PMC. Post your roleplays here!

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by Roxthesox » 9/17/2012

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Introduction
This thread will serve as a hub for those who share the idea of improving PlanetMinecraft's standard of RP. Recently the amount of creative threads, characters, and ideas have been on the downfall. We look to change that. As a member of the coalition you must prove yourself a confident roleplayer by posting creative roleplay, and making the experience better for all involved.


Rules and Guidelines

[1] General forum rules apply when talking here, don't forget 'em.
[2] Feel free to discuss RP ideas freely to receive the constructive criticism of the coalition. When discussing an RP do not refer to it in an overly negative manner, this really doesn't help anyone. However funny your jokes might be, tell them through PM.
[3] To become a member provide us with proof that you're dedicated to making this site's roleplay community better. One liners and unoriginal roleplay threads do not help this site.
[4] Membership may be offered, though you can also apply, see below.


Members and Recruiters

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Those with italicised names are also recruiters, capable of accepting people into the coalition.


From left to right: SilentAero, Roxthesox, Pokemonboy100, MCVipond, Lovasus, Jesuitical, BrookeG2106, Regomania, InfraRedd, Loopo Paw, Xamblore, Gargoyle123, Imbeast11, Nron


Tutorials and Help


Looking to improve your own roleplay? Look no further!


Aero's guide to lengthier posts!

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Notorious for posting one-liners? Than these might help you!


Silent, I'm not a good writer, but I love RPing!

This is understandable. However, it is fairly easy to make at least a par post by adding more description and/or actions. You do not necessarily have to be an amazing writer to be considered up to standard, you just need something a little longer than a one-liner post.

Bad:
"Jacob punched her. 'That's for making me pay the bill!'"

Better:
"Jacob lightly punched Jenna on the shoulder in a playful way, followed by a boyish giggle and a warm smile. "That's for making me pay the bill back at the restaurant. Now, shall we head back to the dorm? I need to get back onto a proper sleep schedule!" He said in a casual tone of voice."

See what I did? I made it clear what he was doing and why, and I also put insight for his next actions so that "Jenna" has more to respond to and has no reason to post a one-liner.




But wait! What if I'm in a situation where I can't do much!?

Fear not, this is possible to avoid as well! I will set the scene.

James has been kidnapped and he has been chained to a stone wall. A speaker starts talking to him, and he must respond.

All I know, a typical user would just post something along the lines of a one-liner. However, with moderate skill, this can be avoided. Look:

Bad:
"James said 'What do you want?'"

Better:
"James looked at the small speaker in the corner of the room. 'What do you want from me?!' He shouted angrily with a scared tone mixed in. He tried to struggle free from the iron chains, but his attempts were futile and he just ended up hurting himself a bit on them. A heavy sigh escaped as he looked down to the ground. It was all dusty and covered in tiny pebbles. It didn't even look cool like he imagined a stone cave to be when he was younger!"


Aero's blog on certain problems with current RP.
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http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/regarding-the-problems-with-our-rpcommunity/


Membership


As a member of the coalition you agree to help improve the standard of roleplay on PMC, through tutorials, simple tips, or the creation of original and fun roleplay. To become a member, simply state that you'd like to join us. If we believe you're a qualified roleplay fit for the coalition you'll be added to the members section.


Working on creating an RP thread for the coalition and of course the rest of the roleplaying community. It'll be a place where we can tutor new roleplayers, as well as let the "trainees" show us that they got what it takes.
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by MCvipond1 » 9/17/2012

Well, I'm in.
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by SilentAero » 9/17/2012

I can write some tutorial stuff or something.
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by Roxthesox » 9/17/2012

Yes, I'm currently working on a tutorial as well. The more the merrier though, so post links to those you've made!

Also, I know you're a confident roleplayer Vipond, adding you now.
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by Revolver_Ocelot » 9/17/2012

I'd like to join!
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by Roxthesox » 9/17/2012

Revolver, I'm not too certain. Could you provide evidence of roleplay that would qualify to join the coalition? You've come across as a bit, "trolly" to me.
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by Revolver_Ocelot » 9/17/2012

This was the first RP i ever made, it was on my other account so that's why the name is....well my name post573156.html?hilit=the%20tournament%20rp%20lukebaxter77#p573156
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by Gargoyle123 » 9/17/2012

May I join? Yes, I may not have seemed too intent to help this RPC become better in the past, but the past is the past, and the future is the present.
The reason I write is to escape reality, live out my dreams, and be happy in some other place, but lately even that seems impossible, and I've come to realize it is.
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by Linkofages » 9/17/2012

i dont know about me but im not an idoit at rp and i think im decent. im still learning tho.
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by Roxthesox » 9/17/2012

Perhaps that isn't the best example you can provide, I see many one-liners on your part, which is something we're trying to stop.

If you both can provide evidence that you're qualified roleplayers than I'll talk to the other members about membership.
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by Revolver_Ocelot » 9/17/2012

Well im writing a tutorial now, but the reason i've been writing one-liners lately is because of the stress im going through right now, i just moved schools and haven't been getting much sleep from the piles and piles of homework....I'm trying to write more detail though...
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by Gargoyle123 » 9/17/2012

How can I provide evidence? I could show you some of my more recent posts, that aren't one-liners, if that'd help. Or, I can write my UnderBane RP, or my Pure Angel RP, but that could take a moderately long time to do.
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