Indoctrination - Forum RP Application

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by BlackFTW » 5/29/2012

A seemingly normal highschool is taken under lockdown "because of a criminal on the streets". The entire school is shut down and into lockdown. A group of teens decided to sneak away from everyone and into the library. When the lights go back on, they try to leave the library, but the doors are locked. The lights suddenly flash back off, and there's screams. Blood splatters onto the glass doors, and a dead body, half eaten, falls against the glass, only slightly visible in the darkness.

They tried the air-ducts, and made it into the main hall, but the doors were locked. They couldn't open them. They were hunted down, and killed. They all died.

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The souls of past victims sent to the Indoctrination, controlled by a half-machine half-demon being, are reincarnated into the Human Realm. The only link they could get to the Human Realm was through a seemingly normal school. In the furnace room, when it was first built, a blood symbol was "painted" onto the floor. This blood symbol would sent the building and all its contents into the Hell Void, the link between worlds. The spirits are given a materialistic body, and are sent to kill and eat the souls of the humans within the school.

Upon the consumption of nine innocent souls, a Reincarnation would be given a demon body, and thus unleashed back into the Indoctrination for perfection. Then, it'd be sent to the Mortal World to wreck havoc. In a way, McNamara High is a feeding ground for Reincarnations. Only to be used as a harvesting ground. Three months before graduation, the school would be transported, via the blood symbol, into the Hell Void. And when finished, it would be wiped from every mortal mind, and it would replaced a different highschool in the world.

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1.) Please use grammar, punctuation, and proper spelling.
2.) Do NOT be "perfect" or over-powered. Being so will make you be frowned upon as a RPer, and shunned from all existence.
3.) Please try to refrain from posting one-liners. If you're stuck in a conversation with nothing else to do, please at least try to not go "'Well, I'm sad.'", and instead go "'Well, I'm sad' Donald replied as he fiddled with his ivory-red hair hanging in front of his eyes."
4.) Don't go swear-happy. Minor swear-words are fine.
Application Rules: Delete everything in parenthesis. You must use the given format, bold code included. You must be fifteen plus. Having any special powers will result in immediate declining; you are a NORMAL teen.

Application Format:

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[b]Name:[/b] (Full name.)
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Weight:[/b]
[b]Height:[/b] (I can't express how much I wished someone would add this into their application, sometimes.)
[b]Physical Appearance:[/b]
[b]Dialogue:[/b] (You don't have to make this long or anything. This is just to ask, "How do you want to RP?")
[b]Backstory:[/b] (Please make it at least a paragraph. Can be in either first or third person, depending on which is easier for you.)
[b]Anything Else?[/b]


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by Nron » 5/29/2012

Curious Questions:

1. What role will applicants be applying for exactly? The souls of the deceased? Or regular teens inside this school?

2. Do applicants have to be students of the school (if the latter part of my earlier question is accurate) or can they apply to be teachers or faculty?
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by BlackFTW » 5/29/2012

You SHOULD be applying for normal humans. If your application is amazingly amazing enough, I might let you be something else.

You don't have to be a student. You can be a teacher if you want.
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by Nron » 5/29/2012

BlackFTW wrote:You SHOULD be applying for normal humans. If your application is amazingly amazing enough, I might let you be something else.

You don't have to be a student. You can be a teacher if you want.



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by Heavenmummy » 5/29/2012

Name: P.K. Ladrido
Age: 29 - IGA, RLA - 16
Gender: Male
Weight:121 lbs
Height: (I can't express how much I wished someone would add this into their application, sometimes.)Six foot, Eight Inches
Physical Appearance: Blonde Kid With a laptop bag.
Dialogue: (You don't have to make this long or anything. This is just to ask, "How do you want to RP?") I want to be very serious about this Rp, sounds fun.
Backstory: (Please make it at least a paragraph. Can be in either first or third person, depending on which is easier for you.)P.K. was an intelligent child all his life, in school he always got many A's but every now or then a B. He loved to help smaller kids. He always dreamed of being a teacher, So he got his masters degree in college and he started his teaching career, his first job was at a High school in a somewhat seemingly nice neighborhood. He took his first step in his teaching career, but he didnt know what he got into after he heard about the criminal in the streets when the school went on lock-down.
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by Heavenmummy » 5/29/2012

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by iHazRabiez » 5/29/2012

Heavenmummy wrote:Name: P.K. Ladrido
Age: 29 - IGA, RLA - 16
Gender: Male
Weight:121 lbs
Height: (I can't express how much I wished someone would add this into their application, sometimes.)Six foot, Eight Inches
Physical Appearance: Blonde Kid With a laptop bag.
Dialogue: (You don't have to make this long or anything. This is just to ask, "How do you want to RP?") I want to be very serious about this Rp, sounds fun.
Backstory: ~Snip~
Anything Else?

Hahaha. Nope. Denied. Didn't read teh rules.
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by BlackFTW » 5/29/2012

Heavenmummy wrote:Name: P.K. Ladrido
Age: 29 - IGA, RLA - 16
Gender: Male
Weight:121 lbs
Height: (I can't express how much I wished someone would add this into their application, sometimes.)Six foot, Eight Inches
Physical Appearance: Blonde Kid With a laptop bag.
Dialogue: (You don't have to make this long or anything. This is just to ask, "How do you want to RP?") I want to be very serious about this Rp, sounds fun.
Backstory: -Snip-
Anything Else?

Please re-read the rules. You also did the "Dialogue" part wrong.
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by iHazRabiez » 5/29/2012

Name: "The Vigil", "The Sentinel" (Only known Aliases)
Age: Countless Millenium.
Gender: Genderless.
Weight: About 223 pounds. Give or take.
Height: About 6 feet, 11 inches.
Physical Appearance:
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Dialogue: The machine crawled from the "portal". It let out a growl. It crawled onto the wall, and looked for a vent. It found the target, and crawled in. It was able to fit into most tight spaces. It began to look for prey.
Backstory: "The Vigil", or "The Sentinel", is an ancient machine. It was captured, and hacked during its "cycle". It was inactive when it was hacked. But this allowed a virus to be uploaded; a virus that turned it into a drone for the "leader". Instead of its original logic of: "4 is greater than 2." Its logic became: "2 is greater than 1." It is still correct, but in a different way. Ever since "The Sentinel" was "changed", it has helped in many assaults. It has a deep hatred for most organics, and is obsessed with the false truth that they corrupted it. "The Sentinel", remembers being created. It remembers the creators. It remembers their deaths. It remembers the logs. Everything, except the truth of the logic change.
Before the things came, and corrupted the unit, it was an experimental unit. Who created it, remains a mystery to many organics. But, one thing is obvious, it was designed for reconnaissance, and sabotage.It stood by its creator, until the organic's dying breath. It was transported between many units after that. It was upgraded with many experimental units. Even an experimental emotion core. Which, failed, in the end.
A few other units similar to it were designed. It felt superior, but also it felt obliged to teach them. They were inseperable. Literally. They traded programs. It seemed to be effective, their combat skills improved rapidly. But soon, they developed sentience. Exactly how, remained a mystery to the organics who created it.
But, the truth lies deeper. The sentience was due to intervention by the "things". It was one of the first stages of their plan. A good plan. It ultimately succeeded in the end. The organic creators killed the newer units, believing they were the problem. And when the things came, they gained the synthetics trust. And it quickly allied itself with them, after given the oppurtunity. It disappeared with the things, after it was finished.
It is a sabouteur, and does not usually make its presence known. It hardly uses the floor, instead, climbing on walls and ceilings for added stealth. Sometimes it will hide in the corners, and leap out. It is made of a springy-synthetic "tissue", that acts like organic muscle, which allows it to jump/leap great distances. Its only "weapon" is a weak laser that fires from its optical "eye". Other than that, it uses its body in many ways. It has the ability to jam radios, and render some electronics useless when in their proximity. It hides in tight spots, and dark corridors. Sometimes even crawling on the roof, and dropping behind unsuspecting victims.
Anything Else? In case you didn't know, it helps the demon-things. It's also a machine.
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by Nron » 5/29/2012

Name: Sycorax Caliban

Age: Actual: 1276

On the Job: 31

Gender: Male

Weight: Changes on a whimsy, normally 190+

Height: Same as above, though he seems to prefer being at around 6' 6' or up.

Physical Appearance: Human:
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Cambion:
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Dialogue: The group stared at the horns that were protruding from the sides of their quirky teacher's noggin, the stares ranging from confused to surprised to downright amused. Sycorax, for his part, simply stared back at them, his arms crossed and his foot tapping.

"Well," he said, his voice deadpan, "which one of you is going to make a Narnia joke? Because I can assure you I am not as timid as Mr. Tumnus. These horns can do a lot more than just complement my great looks, believe me on that."

Backstory: Professor Sycorax Caliban had been a teacher at McNamara High for longer than anyone could remember. He was a charming, handsome, thirty something year old man who seemed to always be the talk of the majority of his female students. He was well liked by the male student body, if only because he had a tendency to overlook dress code and small student conduct violations as well as joining in on some of the dirtier jokes, though he had a bad tendency to call himself 'handsome' or 'dashing' all too often.

Nobody was quite sure what Professor Caliban taught. The sign on his classroom door read 'Ancient Mythology' but the students in his classes never seemed to learn anything about that subject. Instead the Professor would come in, sit on his desk with a drink in hand, and start to talk about whatever he felt like. Graduates of his class (and EVERY student who attended his classes passed them) said that they had learned things about politics, modern cinematography, and even the effect of mules on United States military operations

And that was probably the reason why Professor Caliban had never been fired. His classes were so randomly interesting that none of his students, regardless of their GPA, wanted to miss even one class. It was truly something astounding to behold.

Another odd thing about the Professor was that nobody who graduated from McNamara High could ever recall what he looked like or exactly how old he was. He was never pictured in any of the school yearbooks or newspaper articles, even when people were certain that he had been in the shot. When asked about it the Professor would simply give a prize winning smile and shrug. And nobody ever questioned that.

What the faculty and students of McNamara High didn't realize was that their quirky yet lovable 'Mythology' teacher was, in fact, not human at all, though he was quite close. You see, Professor Sycorax Caliban was what is known as a 'Cambion', the offspring of an Incubus and a human female. One would normally think that this would make Sycorax invincible or capable of throwing around fireballs like some sort of comic book hero. This was not the case.

While Sycorax did inherit a few traits from his demon spawn father (Immortality, minor shape shifting, somewhat enhanced physical capabilities, and weak mind altering powers) Sycorax was, for the most part, entirely human. He could be injured as easily as anyone else, though it would take marginally more than usual to kill him (Immortal doesn't mean the same thing as unkillable. Staying handsome forever doesn't do you any good against a speeding car or a bullet.)

Now the question you're probably asking right now is 'Why in the nine hells would a half-demon be teaching at a public high school? The answer was simple: It was relaxing, it was easy, and, most importantly, it was safe. Sycorax had been alive for a long time, having witnessed (and in some cases involuntarily fought in) various wars and conflicts, each leaving him more and more shaken at the prospect of dying.

When he had heard that McNamara High was hiring a new teacher nearly 20 years ago he could have sworn he had died and gone to heaven (though he would probably like to revoke the first part of that saying). The job was easy enough and after about a year of reading out of a boring textbook, Sycorax had decided that if humans could put things in books to read to students, he could do the same thing without the books or any of the boring subjects.

Eternal life was good. He could work a few hours a day and never assign any work that he would eventually need to grade or check and then he could retreat to his home where he would spend the rest of the day doing nothing but enjoying himself and fooling around. Which is why the events that were about to unfurl at McNamara High would end up shattering both Sycorax's peaceful life and his charade as a quirky teacher.

For while Sycorax was half-demon, he was still very much half-human. He may have only had half a soul but it was a soul none the less.

Anything Else? Sycorax, once his charade is over with, has a bad habit of talking about the past and the various people he had met over the time he was alive as well as the things he had supposedly done that had major impacts on history.

While he has shape shifting abilities, they are extremely limited, allowing him to only change his height, weight and physical appearance slightly. He may not shift into anything non-human or that is not male. Shifting his form in no way increases or decreases his physical abilities.

I'm not sure if this character would conflict with any part of the story you have planned but if It does let me know and I'll either edit it accordingly or start a new one.

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Nron wrote:Name: Sycorax Caliban
Age: Actual: 1276
On the Job: 31
Gender: Male
Weight: Changes on a whimsy, normally 190+
Height: Same as above, though he seems to prefer being at around 6' 6' or up.
Physical Appearance: -Snip-
Dialogue: -snip-
Backstory: -Snip-
Anything Else?-Snip-
Cheers

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That has to be one of the best applications I have ever seen, no joke.
Definitely accepted. I'm assuming you're a long-term, experienced RPer?
And no, it doesn't conflict with anything because every part of the story I have thought of is in the main post. I don't have hidden plans, because declining someone because of that would just be unfair.

iHazRabiez wrote:Name: "The Vigil", "The Sentinel" (Only known Aliases)
Age: Countless Millenium.
Gender: Genderless.
Weight: About 223 pounds. Give or take.
Height: About 6 feet, 11 inches.
Physical Appearance: -Snip-
Dialogue: -Snip-
Backstory: -Snip-
Anything Else? In case you didn't know, it helps the demon-things. It's also a machine.

I, personally, don't think that's even much of a backstory. It's mostly explaining what it can do and what it does, not where it came from or whatever. Sorry, but I'd have to say declined.

Also, I guess I'll make my own character soon/now.
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