Planet Minecraft

Yeah, I fixed it. Edited a few things too.
And now, I fixed it again.
Name:James Riosku

Age: 19

Sex:Male

Height:6'1

Weight: 110

Build: Thin, with long muscles. He's at about below average strength, but he's not very weak.

Former Occupation: Medical student

Talents: Very quick with both hands and feet. Good with anything with a tip or a short barrel. Good understanding of medicine.

Items: WWII Trench knife, M1911 Pistol, Scalpel.

Appearance:A young, thin man with a white trench coat, knife hanging at his side. Long black hair and gray, shell shocked eyes. He has a medical ID hanging from his neck, as he used to study there.

Biography: James lived a very "average" life. Didn't do many sports, had a decent amount of friends. He was always a bit quiet and usually spent the time before bed sharpening his knife.He always seemed to like the knives. His speed and size made small knives a good fit for his fighting style, so he had a weapons maker make him his two un-medical weapons. He always seemed to be somewhere near where something was going to happen. He was studying at the hospital where the first zombie was brought before reanimation.He saw his colleagues eaten alive before him, which gave him paranoia. He fled the scene,grabbing a scapel for defense, and made his way home, which was put under siege by the undead monstrosities, and packed his pistol and knife. He got in his car and drove to the next town,, which was also infested. He has seen many of the horrors of the war against the undead.
Anything Else: Nope, except for CHICKEN COOP

Are you happy Gin? I hope all the trouble was worth it.

Name:Scott Król

Age: 23

Sex: Male

Height:6'1

Weight: 167

Build: Thin

Former Occupation: Chef

Talents: Amazing Cook

Items: Lighter, Soup , and Pocket knife

Appearance:A brown haired, blue eyed man.

Biography: Scott was originally polish born but then was moved to St.Louis when he was 5 because of his fathers job movement.Hes mother left him when he was 12 because of his Parents arguments.He is single and has no children. When it comes to General Knowledge Scott is not a bright spark, but when its Cooking he knows just what you need, he got an A* grade in his Food tech GCSE at the age of 13! Also he has recently left his home in St.Louis to live in New York with his Former college buddies.He is not very great with weapons but knows how to cook up some soup or stew whenever you'd like.

Anything else?naaaaaa........... oh yeah Chicken coops![/quote]
Re evaluate plz

Yeah, I fixed it. Edited a few things too.
And now, I fixed it again.
Name:James Riosku

Age: 19

Sex:Male

Height:6'1

Weight: 110

Build: Thin, with long muscles. He's at about below average strength, but he's not very weak.

Former Occupation: Medical student

Talents: Very quick with both hands and feet. Good with anything with a tip or a short barrel. Good understanding of medicine.

Items: WWII Trench knife, M1911 Pistol, Scalpel.

Appearance:A young, thin man with a white trench coat, knife hanging at his side. Long black hair and gray, shell shocked eyes. He has a medical ID hanging from his neck, as he used to study there.

Biography: James lived a very "average" life. Didn't do many sports, had a decent amount of friends. He was always a bit quiet and usually spent the time before bed sharpening his knife.He always seemed to like the knives. His speed and size made small knives a good fit for his fighting style, so he had a weapons maker make him his two un-medical weapons. He always seemed to be somewhere near where something was going to happen. He was studying at the hospital where the first zombie was brought before reanimation.He saw his colleagues eaten alive before him, which gave him paranoia. He fled the scene,grabbing a scapel for defense, and made his way home, which was put under siege by the undead monstrosities, and packed his pistol and knife. He got in his car and drove to the next town,, which was also infested. He has seen many of the horrors of the war against the undead.
Anything Else: Nope, except for CHICKEN COOP

Are you happy Gin? I hope all the trouble was worth it.

The attitude could do with being dropped. Other than that it'll do. Accepted.

Name: Jason Deverly

Age: 25

Sex: Male

Height: 6'3

Weight: 146 lbs.

Build: Athletic.

Former Occupation: Assistant doctor.

Talents: He's good at calming people down, he's also good with needles.

Items: Some painkillers, a medium sized needle, knife.

Appearance:

Spoiler

Biography: Jason was born into a middle class family. Not to poor, not to rich. He lived in New Jersey with his parents. He did have a brother, but he was much older than Jason is. Jason's mother was a teacher, and his father was a forensic scientist. Unlike his parents, he wanted to be a doctor. Jason went through college, and his parents payed for him to go to medical school. Sadly the school is in Baltimore, Maryland. Before Jason left, his father gave him a knife, as a gift. So he took a plane to Maryland, and it was a disaster. Buildings were abandoned, and corpses were everywhere. Then he saw a zombie, and it was close to eating him. Luckily he brought some medical supplies, and also a knife. He stabbed the zombie, then ran away. He hid in a nearby house, and was scared. He has never been in a situation like this. Pull yourself together Jason! he thinks. It calms him down a little bit. Now he wonders around, trying to find a way out of Maryland.

Anything Else: I lost the key to my house in a chicken coop. I blame Treecko.

^^

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Works for me. Accepted.

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I'd like you to redo the backstory as your current one tells us nothing about your character other than where he came from and some pointless thing about a engineering which doesn't tie in with his talents.

Thanatos, no need to be butt-hurt. Your accepted, by the way.

Jack, we could do without all of the doctors, but I guess your accepted.

Cool beans.

Name:Scott Król

Age: 23

Sex: Male

Height:6'1

Weight: 167

Build: Thin

Former Occupation: Chef

Talents: Amazing Cook

Items: Lighter, Soup , and Pocket knife

Appearance:A brown haired, blue eyed man.

Biography: Scott was originally polish born but then was moved to St.Louis when he was 5 because of his fathers job movement.Hes mother left him when he was 12 because of his Parents arguments.He is single and has no children. When it comes to General Knowledge Scott is not a bright spark, but when its Cooking he knows just what you need, he got an A* grade in his Food tech GCSE at the age of 13! Also he has recently left his home in St.Louis to live in New York with his Former college buddies.He is not very great with weapons but knows how to cook up some soup or stew whenever you'd like.He is now working in Maryland as a chef in Mcdonalds and killed his first zombie after he noticed a man was inside the shop with half his head split open and sluring is speech.

Anything else?naaaaaa........... oh yeah Chicken coops!

re-re-evaluate plz

Hey man, I just got frustrated. Im not usually like that. I just hate redoing things 3 times over.

seriously re evaluate again plz!

Battle, just add how he came to Maryland and how he reacted to the zombies...

i added it