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Team Crafteds Night A Parody Of Let Me Go

James44970's Avatar James449701/10/14 2:24 pm
2/2/2014 4:24 am
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Hey Guys James here, I'm quite new to Planet Minecraft and im looking forward to the future. Ive made a song about Team Crafted. I just want to know if its any good or not, Give me advice such as diffrent lyrics. I wrote them myself lol.
I give credit to:Gary Barlow for the song and Team Crafted. And advise to listen To Let me go and replace the words with these and see if it sounds good.
Team Crafteds Night Lyrics:

A room full of Zombies
A broken Sword
And only me to fight
For every single kill
No Creepers or spiders
Could make this cool
To be better but never dead
To slam, but never run
It's a life with them, and i need, someone
to be killed, to be cool, no (Deadlox and ssundee come in)
This is gonna take a bit of slaughtering but I know its nice for you

Die Now and let me live
That sky will save your soul
When you dont die you will know
That this gonna take a bit of slaughtering but I know its nice for you
Let me live

A head full of brains
And no where safe
When apocs are big enough, our pigs turn into pigmen
It's a life with them, and i need, someone
to be killed, to be cool, no (Jerome Asf and HuskyMudkipz come in)
This is gonna take a bit of slaughtering but I know its nice for you

Die now and let me live
That sky will save your soul
When you dont die you will know
This is gonna take a bit of slaughtering but I know its nice for you

So let me live life wont get better
You wont kill me oh never never(Minecraftuniverse BajanCanadian come in)
I know you lie there waiting all night long, so find some frikin' shine

Die Now and let me live go (Let me live)
That sky will save your soul (Let it kill the zombies tonight)
Die now and let me live (Let me live let me live)
That sky will save your soul
This is gonna take a bit of slaughtering but I know its nice for you
Let me live

Lyrics by James aka James44970, Again give me any hints to make the song better or anything, If this does get popular (Unlikely) Ive got a good idea for the video!
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02/02/2014 4:24 am
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James44970
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This is a parody Of Gary barlows Let me go.
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01/29/2014 5:30 pm
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Kittiesaresocute
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what is this parody a parody of ? like what song is this?
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01/25/2014 11:14 am
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Bump
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01/11/2014 6:26 am
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James44970
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I also need some help creating another song and I need your opinion for what song for me to do next.If you want to help me just ask.
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01/11/2014 5:59 am
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James44970
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Thanks alpha, I kinda keep changing them to get better and I am quite young XD
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01/11/2014 5:51 am
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AlphaCogz
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awesome lyrics!
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01/11/2014 5:04 am
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Blinxnot123
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It's pretty good, I could help you if you want! ^^
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01/11/2014 5:34 am
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James44970
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Yes I would like that very much!
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01/11/2014 4:58 am
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Colonellooo
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Its nice but i'd suggest not making the song about Team Crafted. It really doesn't have anything to do with them and quite a bit of people actually don't like them. Although I do like Team Crafted but you'll get more of an audience if you don't base it around them and instead use some various skins as characters.
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01/11/2014 5:34 am
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James44970
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What is your suggested characters then?
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01/11/2014 4:36 am
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James44970
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Any Feedback please?
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