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by Roxthesox » 8/18/2012

Both of you are being Denied.

Work on the originality of your characters. As well as their backstories, they should be at least two paragraphs.
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by Dr_Trapezoid » 8/18/2012

I believe I made the correct changes to my application. I changed the age and certain events to make it all fit.
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by Roxthesox » 8/18/2012

Alright, I understand you're a dragon but, as usual, don't powergame to much. If your RP is inadequate then I'll revoke your application. Do not disappoint us. Accepted.
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by Candlebor » 8/18/2012

Full Name: Tyler Black
Age:34.
Race/Species:Human
Sex:Male.

Back Story: Tyler had few friends. He was not very social and didn't realy understand how to make them. He was, however, extremely intelligent and always made top grades throughout school and college. However, right when he was about to graduate, his hometown was raided by a large group of bandits and mercenaries. He wasn't the best athletically, but joined a resistance to fight off the raiders. He discovered he was a very good shot and sniped a large portion of the enemy, leading the way to the city to be restored. His only real friend after the fight was Dillon, a civil engineer. He was also very smart and didn't have good social skills. Eventually, Tyler got a job in the company Dillon worked for. One day they were both called to a business trip on a large island near Florida. The company provided a luxury boat to ride there. However, the boat got lost and strange things began to happen...

Thick fog surrounded the boat, and occasionally, odd voices could be heard. One day the fog cleared up, but a strange black ship appeared. Humans could be seen running on it. Then, the black ship strted firing cannons upon the boat they were in. The Captain started to become scared. A storm started very suddenly, and Tyler quickly searched his bag and found his revolver. Yes, he is always prepared. He fired on the humans in the black ship, taking down several, but it seemed like thousands were on it. He gave up and heard a cry of agony! Dillon had been shot! He rushed to his side but all Dillon said was "Look in the satchel I brought." "It is your only chance" Dillon fell over, dead...
Tyler rushed to the satchel and looked inside. There was a fedora, which he donned, a blunt knife, some granola bars and bottled water, but also there was a neclace with a purple gem in it. Attatched was a note saying "This will be salvation in times of great need" He pondered this and put it on. He put the rest of the items back in the statchel and put it on. He hurried to his bag and grabbed a few bandages and a pair of fingerless gloves. He jumped off the boat and swam to a cluster of floating debris. It was able to hold him for a few days, most of which he was unconsious. Tyler woke up on an island. He felt pain all over and saw how badly he was cut up. He wondered if there were any other people here. Then he noticed the satchel and it's contents were miraculously dry! He set off looking for food, water and shelter with a slight limp, because of a cut on his leg.

Appearance: Wears a tattered short sleeve white buttondown shirt and khakis. All of his clothes are waterlogged for now. He also wears a fedora and satchel. He has a slight amount of facial hair and brown colored hair. He has a gash on his leg that badly needs medical attention, which is hard to find on an island. He may have to gather supplies to bind it. His eyes are brown and he has a normal, slightly thin build. One of his shoes has a large hole, revealing the sock below. His height is somewhere near six feet
Extra Info: His mother is still alive, but his father was killed when his hometown was raided. He was never good at athletics. He does not talk much, but usually speaks wise words. He is known to quote many famous people. He likes waffles more than pancakes. He has an affinity for canines. He has learnedd many survival skills. He is not very strong. Hates cats. He can get obsessed with one thing somketimes. He is a mediocre chef, but can cook. NOT a biologist, so dosen't know much about animals. Cannot run fast. Has a lot of stamina, but cannot hurt much without a good weapon. Wears a pair of fingerless gloves, which may be useful. Can take cold better than heat. Not very brave but willing to sacrifice himself if needed.

Thats all! I hope it's O.K. :)
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by Candlebor » 8/18/2012

Sorry, the format got messed up :o
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by Roxthesox » 8/18/2012

Make use the edit button.
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by Candlebor » 8/18/2012

Ok got it... But for some reason the text wont seperate? It's like the space/enter buttons do nothing?
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by Revolver_Ocelot » 8/18/2012

To the rescue!
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Full Name: Tyler Black     
                                                                                                                                            Age:34.                                                                                                                                        Race/Species: Human.                                                                                                                                                                                   Sex:Male.                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Back Story: Tyler had few friends. He was not very social and didn't realy understand how to make them. He was, however, extremely intelligent and always made top grades throughout school and college. However, right when he was about to graduate, his hometown was raided by a large group of bandits and mercenaries. He wasn't the best athletically, but joined a resistance to fight off the raiders. He discovered he was a very good shot and sniped a large portion of the enemy, leading the way to the city to be restored.                                                                                                                                                  His only real friend after the fight was Dillon, a civil engineer. He was also very smart and didn't have good social skills. Eventually, Tyler got a job in the company Dillon worked for. One day they were both called to a business trip on a large island near Florida. The company provided a luxury boat to ride there. However, the boat got lost and strange things began to happen...                                                                              Thick fog surrounded the boat, and occasionally, odd voices could be heard. One day the fog cleared up, but a strange black ship appeared. Humans could be seen running on it. Then, the black ship strted firing cannons upon the boat they were in. The Captain started to become scared. A storm started very suddenly, and Tyler quickly searched his bag and found his revolver. Yes, he is always prepared. He fired on the humans in the black ship, taking down several, but it seemed like thousands were on it. He gave up and heard a cry of agony! Dillon had been shot! He rushed to his side but all Dillon said was "Look in the satchel I brought." "It is your only chance" Dillon fell over, dead...                                                                                                                            Tyler rushed to the satchel and looked inside. There was a fedora, which he donned, a blunt knife, some granola bars and bottled water, but also there was a neclace with a purple gem in it. Attatched was a note saying "This will be salvation in times of great need" He pondered this and put it on. He put the rest of the items back in the statchel and put it on. He hurried to his bag and grabbed a few bandages and a pair of fingerless gloves. He jumped off the boat and swam to a cluster of floating debris. It was able to hold him for a few days, most of which he was unconsious.                                 Tyler woke up on an island. He felt pain all over and saw how badly he was cut up. He wondered if there were any other people here. Then he noticed the satchel and it's contents were miraculously dry! He set off looking for food, water and shelter with a slight limp, because of a cut on his leg.                                                                                          Appearance: Wears a tattered short sleeve white buttondown shirt and khakis. All of his clothes are waterlogged for now. He also wears a fedora and satchel. He has a slight amount of facial hair and brown colored hair. He has a gash on his leg that badly needs medical attention, which is hard to find on an island. He may have to gather supplies to bind it. His eyes are brown and he has a normal, slightly thin build. One of his shoes has a large hole, revealing the sock below. His height is somewhere near six feet                                                                                                                                                      Extra Info: His mother is still alive, but his father was killed when his hometown was raided. He was never good at athletics. He does not talk much, but usually speaks wise words. He is known to quote many famous people. He likes waffles more than pancakes. He has an affinity for canines. He has learnedd many survival skills. He is not very strong. Hates cats. He can get obsessed with one thing somketimes. He is a mediocre chef, but can cook. NOT a biologist, so dosen't know much about animals. Cannot run fast. Has a lot of stamina, but cannot hurt much without a good weapon. Wears a pair of fingerless gloves, which may be useful. Can take cold better than heat. Not very brave but willing to sacrifice himself if needed.

Thats all! I hope it's O.K. :)
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by Candlebor » 8/18/2012

Thanks!!!
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by Candlebor » 8/19/2012

Ok I fixed it.
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by Candlebor » 8/19/2012

Has it been accepted or denied?
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by _LoveBunny_ » 8/20/2012

The first rp on this website o.O *Must join* though I kinda get nervous around all of these frickin' awesome roleplayers x3 App coming.
Come join the forums :)
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