Published Aug 25th, 2016, 8/25/16 5:51 pm
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Français:
Bonjour, je poste ici un test de construction "organique" de dragon, c'est la première fois que j'en fais un et j'espère que ça vous plaira. Comme dit juste avant, c'est un test et je le poste donc ici principalement pour recevoir des critiques constructives de la part de builders expérimentés ^^
J'espère que ça vous plaira, cordialement Akutsu.
English:
Hello, that's my first dragon's build, I post him here to receiv some constructive criticism form experimented builders.
I hope than you'll enjoy that build, cordially Akutsu.
PS: I'm french so forgive me my english :')
Bonjour, je poste ici un test de construction "organique" de dragon, c'est la première fois que j'en fais un et j'espère que ça vous plaira. Comme dit juste avant, c'est un test et je le poste donc ici principalement pour recevoir des critiques constructives de la part de builders expérimentés ^^
J'espère que ça vous plaira, cordialement Akutsu.
English:
Hello, that's my first dragon's build, I post him here to receiv some constructive criticism form experimented builders.
I hope than you'll enjoy that build, cordially Akutsu.
PS: I'm french so forgive me my english :')
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I have a youtube channel with over 200 subscribers: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCRj0DQN5kP636J7CRXnZiPw
and I can give you some advice.
I really like your very first dragon, it looks very decent, there is nice texture and depth and you definetly put lots of effort into it.
Advice:
1. Try to make the wings stand out more by positioning them in a more spread out way, that will make the overall look be more ambitious and Dragon-Looking. Also try to really make Arks on the bottom tips. (5,4,3,2,1 rule works well.)
2. Add more dragon like features for example (spikes on tail and/or body, dragon breath) etc.
3. I know you already put in a lot of effort but more detail will almost always make things look better (just dont over detail.)
In conclusion, you did a really good job!