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Temple of the First Dawn / Temple de la Première Aube

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New video out!



FR:
Bonjour à tous!

Comme je l'avais annoncé, voici le projet du temple finalisé!

Je tiens tout d'abord à remercier Darastlix pour le terraforming de la map et ses magnifiques renders.

Ce projet est donc composé d'un ensemble de batiments perchés sur un plateau montagneux,
le tout dans une ambiance asiatique-japonaise prononcée.

Il est possible que je continue d'ajouter d'autres structures sur cette map.

version de la map: 1.7
ressourcepack: Onigiris

N'oubliez pas de laissez un diamant si vous aimez,
un commentaire si vous avez une question a propos de la map ou de sa création,
Et de vous abonner pour plus de créations! ^^




EN:
Hi everyone!

As I promised, here is the final temple project!

First of all, I would like to thanks greatfully Darastlix for the terraforming and the awesomes renders.

This map is composed by a set of buildings settled on a mountain plateau,
the whole in a strong asian-japanese atmosphere.

map version: 1.7
ressourcepack: Onigiris



Don't forget to leave a diamond if you like,
a comment if you have any question about the map or the creation,
and to subscribe for more content! ^^
Credithttp://www.planetminecraft.com/member/darastlix/
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Vidéo Update ! : by Shizenokami 04/19/2015 7:55:53 amApr 19th, 2015

I'm very proud to present you the video made with the Exodia Build Team

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08/04/2015 7:56 am
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Fonta
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j'adore ce temple des montagnes mais il y a un seul truc qui me tititlle, c'est l'aspect des montagnes sinon c'est vraiment vraiment bien fait :D
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07/22/2015 7:36 am
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CroatiaTheMan
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Great Job!
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04/27/2015 7:12 pm
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DELETE248
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very good
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04/07/2015 5:46 am
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RadarTechnician
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great work from a far distance it looks amazing!
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04/07/2015 4:29 pm
Level 46 : Master Architect
Shizenokami
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thank you ^^
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04/06/2015 1:12 pm
Level 38 : Artisan Engineer
qaupperops
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1000+ views but only 127 diamonds... seems legit. 
/rant/ Good submissions like this deserve more diamonds /rant/
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04/06/2015 1:41 pm
Level 46 : Master Architect
Shizenokami
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It's a pretty good ratio for me ^^
1 diamond for 10 views...
Maybe more  when
<spoiler> The video will be done and posted ^^ </spoiler>
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04/06/2015 9:04 am
Level 30 : Artisan Zombie
pearyoshi
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I gave you a diamond but I'm still disappointed. There is no interior. So it  doesn't realy feel like 100% complete. There are remains of some wool blocks inside probably used as marks, and the whole structure is just a hollow coulisse.
Also I'm not very fond of that many kinds of materials used on the ground, in the landscape. Why the sand stone on the hills otherwise made of simple stone? Why such a shattered pattern all over the pathways made of dirt, gravel, grass, cobble and even wood here an there? It doesn't look good.
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04/06/2015 10:37 am
Level 46 : Master Architect
Shizenokami
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ok ^^
First of all, I thank you for your commentary.
Then:
1) There is no interior because I chosed to not do them. (It's a point of vew, i totally agree with you on this point)
2)why should i remove whole block if you would not see them?
3)The sandstone on the hills come from the terraforming, see that point with Darastlix. I found this terrain amazing. If you not agree with it, it's ok.
4)The paterns of the ground/roads ... what can i say about this ... I made them... they seemed good to me...
It's a question of tastes again i suppose...

5) Do you used the right ressourcepack?

To conclude, if you do not like my build, why did you give me a diamond for it? ^^
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04/06/2015 11:58 am
Level 30 : Artisan Zombie
pearyoshi
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It might look strange right? Of course I gave you the diamond because the build looked so good on the images that it just could't be bad. It was before I downloaded it. And after I downloaded it, I still really liked the exterior of the buildings. It's very fancy and interesting and there's certainly a lot of genuine minecraft work in it. I appreciate it very much! ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ I just wanted to point out things that I didn't like. Let's call it a constructive critique. I'm sorry if it sounded like a hate or something like it.

About the missing interior, to make my point more constructive ( ⋂‿⋂’), I get it, you didn't want to do that from whatever reason, it's non of my business. But as you probably know, traditional buildings in Asia, or at least in Japan, are based on pillars. All the mass of the building rests on them (unlike in the west where it's the walls that support the building). So if I may, you don't have to make like furniture or something, but maybe you could make an interesting interior with these construction elements like reasonably placed pillars and struts.
Which kinda leads me to a question: Why are there redstone controlled pistons at the main gate to the temple? (lever inside) Was something planned there?

And no, I didn't use any custom textures. Yes, my bad.

So I'd like to say sorry for sounding rude or something. I didn't intend it. I hope all's fine 〜( ̄▽ ̄〜)
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