Olliver the acrobat (INTENSE STORY) for cicus skin contest  !!! Minecraft Skin

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Olliver the acrobat (INTENSE STORY) for cicus skin contest !!!

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HELLO EVERYONE

Olliver the acrobat (INTENSE STORY) for cicus skin contest  !!! Minecraft Skin

a skin of James Olliver's grandpa :http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/james-circus-contest-extra/ 

STORY

Hello this is the story of Olliver.
Olliver wanted to be a famous acrobat just like his grandpa.
His grandpa James was the best acrobat in the world , he traveled 
with the famous planet minecraft circus . Only the best traveled with that circus
He peformed the most amazing tricks like the amazing backflip were he flips 10 times while eating a subway sandwich
Olliver always watched how the crowd reacts to his tricks.
One day Ollivers grandpa gave him his belt and sad " Ollie i want you to ceep our family tradition alive, please become an acrobat like me and teach your grandchildren the ways of an acrobat." 
Soon after the conversation james died . Olliver felt like it was his job to ceep the family tradition alive.

Three years later Olliver tryed to contact the planetminecraft circus to get a job there but the circus traveled to place Olliver couldn't go to. Olliver didn't had the money to travel to the other side of the world . The circus was about to fly away to Belgium in a couple of hours he jump in his car and raced to the airport there were just five minutes left. he saw the circus and sneaked in .
he was hiding in a dark and small place his hart was beating extreamly fast . he hoped no one would find him in there . a few hours later he heard that the plane was landing . he quickly hides in a bag . he felt that someone was picking him up.
he found a hole he could se through he saw the whole circus walking the bearded woman , the jugler , the human canonball everyone was there . but then he saw the security they were checking all the bags . luckly the guy who was holding the bag droped it and ask someone for directions. Olliver quickly crawled out of the bag without anyone noticing .
Olliver ran to the exit but there were some bodyguards guarding the exit. Olliver used a trick he learned form his grandpa and jumped at the ventilation pipe and climbed to a window he then realized how high up he was . a few seconds later a security guard saw him Olliver had no chose other then to make a leap of fait in the garbadge . he jump and landed savely he had some bruses that was everything . all the guards in the airport were chasing him. he was just ten meters away from the gate when he got shot in his left leg . he could never be an acrobat for the rest of his live .everthing he wanted and worked for disappeared in an instant. he just wanted to make his grandpa happy. 
                                                   the end.
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big update : by spacegames 09/22/2014 2:04:59 pmSep 22nd, 2014

i updated the link to james because it was the wrong link
and i made a little diamond favorite and subscribe logo
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09/22/2014 2:56 pm
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Azuliaa
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Wow. That was a great story :D
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09/22/2014 3:08 pm
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spacegames
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thank you i hoped people could read it evendo my grammar kinda sucks
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09/22/2014 2:39 pm
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Disnowball
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Very nice, but you could improve the shading a bit
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09/22/2014 3:07 pm
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spacegames
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what should i improve about the shading then
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09/22/2014 2:32 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Taco
wdw4
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great skin man!
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09/22/2014 3:08 pm
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spacegames
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thank you
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09/21/2014 10:21 pm
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Ukiyo_E
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This is ... awesome XD good luck!
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09/22/2014 10:35 am
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spacegames
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thx :)
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09/21/2014 10:08 pm
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Ree_
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I like it, but the story has too many spelling and grammar errors.
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09/22/2014 10:38 am
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Gent
spacegames
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yeah i'm dutch i have dyslexia
so its hard for me to fix that.
i'm sorry if you got irritated by my bad grammar.
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