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The Half Eater (Chillingly gruesome story [3D effects!])
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psycopomLevel 38 : Artisan Mage
Posted 08/14/12 12:27:32 am , last updated: 08/16/12 7:46:23 am
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Your asleep in your room and your window and door are closed. Suddenly you wake up and a cold feeling comes across you. You look over to your window and it is open, the blinds slowly flapping in the cool breeze. You stand up and close the window and shut the blinds.
Some time later you hear a creak and wake abruptly. You see a shadow walking away from your door. Gripping your covers so hard your hands ache, you worry for what is going to happen to your family. You know that if you go out then you are certain to die, but if you stay in your room then all of your family may die. You get up and look around your room for some sort of weapon. You remember the prized baseball bat signed by Duke Snider himself. You consider the situation and with a quick goodbye you pick up the baseball bat and slowly open your door. As you walk out you catch a glimpse of the monster walking into your little sisters room. It was dark grey all over and had half of its back ripped open, showing what you assume to be a spine. You freeze and touch the carpet, which makes a slight noise. The monster stops, turns around slowly and looks directly at you. It had a huge gaping mouth covering almost all of its face, with huge teeth within it. You scream and turn to run down the stairs. You see a flash out of the corner of your eye and suddenly its standing at the bottom of the stairs. You are already moving to fast to stop and as you fall down the stairs into the monsters mouth, you look back up the stairs and see your family standing there in terror watching you falling to your death. But as you get to the creature it grabs you and pins you against the wall. It then spits some sticky green gunk over you which quickly hardens and traps you against the wall.
All you can do is helplessly watch the monster flash up the stairs and grab your little sister. She lets of the most bloodcurdling scream and the monster sticks the top half of her body in its mouth and bites down.... hard. Blood goes everywhere and your father grabs the ladder and goes to attack the monster but it flashes behind him and kicks him in the back so hard that his ribs burst out of his chest. Your father sprawled over the floor in front of your mother, dead. Your mother starts crying and sinks to the ground, holding the half of your little sister and your father's body that are still left. The monster grabs your mother by the throat and throws her to the side. Blood pored from a gash in her arm.The monster eats half of your father and then walks over and eats the top half of your mother's body. The monster then picks up the three dead half bodies and throws them out the window. Then the monster then walks down the stairs and puts its face right up to yours, the stench of blood coming from its mouth so overwhelming that you almost pass out. It then speaks in a garbling voice "25 years and its your turn" and quickly dispersed into the night sky.
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HELLO PMC. Say hi to The Half Eater. He will eat half of you then leave your eldest son. Then 25 years later he will come back to that son when he is a father and kill all the family bar the eldest son. But if there is no son then he will eat all bar the eldest daughter. But if there are no children at all then he will eat your wife and move on. If you are not married or dating then he will move on to some other poor, poor family.
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| Gender: | Other |
| Tags: | Half, Eater, Story, Mum, Dad, Sister, Brother, Family |
| Credit: | Pagazz (proof reading my story) |
Update #2 : 08/16/2012 7:46:23 am8/16/12
Changed le story slightly
Update #1 : 08/14/2012 1:54:01 am8/14/12
Changed name.
Changed story as part of it did not make sense
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