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Level 43 : Master Fox
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Bam! Steve had finally gotten the gold. Steve knew exactly what to do with it too. Valentine's Day was coming up, so Steve was going to make her a golden apple. All he had to do now was sneak out of the mine, into the house, and into his room without Alex noticing.Steve turned around. A zombie and spider were waiting for Steve right behind his back. Steve's blocky world went black.

...

All Steve felt was heat. He opened his eyes to a horrible sight. Steve was tied over a nearby pool of lava. The heat was sweltering. Steve felt himself drop about one and a half blocks. His nose was just centimeters away from the lava. Steve knows his end is near. The zombie's groans were almost taunting. An idea suddenly pops into Steve's head. If he could move his weight forward, he might be able to push himself to the ledge.. yes! That might work! The idea was useless, however, as Steve felt himself drop. The heat of the moment was too much. 




~Mono
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Update #1 : 09/15/2015 7:39:58 pmSep 15th, 2015

Updated a small section of the story.

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  • Beverly
  • Level 65
  • High Grandmaster Explorer
  • January 30, 2016, 3:48 am
I can't believe I never diamond-ed this. ;-; It's excellent!
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • January 30, 2016, 6:19 am
Aw, thanks! ♥
  • Creatizkit
  • Level 25
  • Expert Mountaineer
  • October 28, 2015, 12:54 am
Congrats on 19th! :P
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • October 28, 2015, 4:03 pm
Thanks! ^^
  • Creatizkit
  • Level 25
  • Expert Mountaineer
  • October 29, 2015, 1:08 am
^^ Your ^^ Welcome ^^
Yes I can't beleive we are both finalists :D
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • October 9, 2015, 3:59 pm
I can't believe it either. xD
get it? :pp jk
No
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • October 10, 2015, 8:16 am
I can't believe you're a finalist. 
I'm jkk xD
D:<
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • October 10, 2015, 8:20 am
I was just kidding <3
<3 MonobaeS
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • October 11, 2015, 11:58 am
this is kinda awkward..
XD why?
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • October 10, 2015, 8:26 am
Master bae G <3
ο»Ώbest I could do, srry bae
<3
  • TheKingOfArkel
  • Level 21
  • Expert Button Pusher
  • September 29, 2015, 8:49 am
isnt the heat of the moment a song?
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 29, 2015, 2:40 pm
nooooo idea. xD
  • mick_5
  • Level 37
  • Artisan Crafter
  • September 25, 2015, 4:04 am
Very nice story.
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 25, 2015, 2:52 pm
Thanks Mr. Mick!
  • mick_5
  • Level 37
  • Artisan Crafter
  • September 26, 2015, 1:52 am
No problem good sir.
  • RenegadeRad
  • Level 9
  • Apprentice Explorer
  • September 21, 2015, 10:40 pm
This is actually a pun, you know xD "Heat of the moment"
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 22, 2015, 2:54 pm
If it's a pun, I don't get it. xD
  • RenegadeRad
  • Level 9
  • Apprentice Explorer
  • September 22, 2015, 4:58 pm
There was lava and steve fell in it "The heat of the moment was too much"  So you are telling me, this is not a pun? xD
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 22, 2015, 6:18 pm
I prefer to think of it as incorperating the title into the story. :P
  • Jalaqua
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Dragon
  • September 8, 2015, 12:01 pm
Ohhh it's beeyutiful
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 8, 2015, 1:05 pm
Thanks!! :D
  • rupert
  • Contest Judge
  • Level 40
  • Master Cowboy
  • September 5, 2015, 10:51 am
and then he respawned
  • Creatizkit
  • Level 25
  • Expert Mountaineer
  • September 9, 2015, 7:22 am
If he was on Hardcore mode = Bad.
  • rupert
  • Contest Judge
  • Level 40
  • Master Cowboy
  • September 9, 2015, 9:03 am
most players would have died LONG ago
  • Creatizkit
  • Level 25
  • Expert Mountaineer
  • September 9, 2015, 10:26 am
I suppose you're right :P
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 5, 2015, 12:08 pm
maybe
maybe not..
Epic Job Mono
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 5, 2015, 8:34 am
Thanks Sir G!
  • CroatiaTheMan
  • Level 53
  • Grandmaster Meme
  • September 18, 2015, 8:30 am
I Posted One Too Mono :D
Np ;)
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 5, 2015, 8:44 am
do ye like that nickname?
well at least its not mister g
  • YTCereal
  • Level 16
  • Journeyman Network
  • September 6, 2015, 6:57 am
Mono G.

master G x Mono
XD
  • SpoopyBlue
  • Level 31
  • Artisan Zombie
  • September 4, 2015, 8:46 pm
Q~Q
but him and alex where together how will she find out he got hurt can se save him...
Q~Q </3
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 5, 2015, 8:35 am
</3 is right ;-;
  • SpoopyBlue
  • Level 31
  • Artisan Zombie
  • September 5, 2015, 8:38 am
Q~Q
  • GrayRemnant
  • Level 56
  • Grandmaster Senpai
  • September 4, 2015, 7:45 pm
LOL!  Boy, Steve sure has been getting killed a lot lately.  He's like Kenny from South Park.  xD
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 5, 2015, 8:35 am
He does have a respawn function. :P
  • GrayRemnant
  • Level 56
  • Grandmaster Senpai
  • September 5, 2015, 11:34 am
True.
  • Myraaa
  • Level 61
  • High Grandmaster Sweetheart
  • September 4, 2015, 7:08 pm
Kind of short, but I really like your writing style. :)
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 4, 2015, 7:11 pm
Thanks!
The stories need to be under 250 words, and mine came in at 176. I suppose I could fit a tad more in.. :D

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