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A Teacher's Life Story 3.

So. Charles mumbled. "m-miss.. I.. I.. didn't br-bring it, but ca-" I slammed the table in frustration and yelled at him.
"YOU NEVER BRING IN YOUR HOMEWORK!! YOU HAVE 1 JOB JUST MAKE MY LIFE EASIER!! NO BUT! BRING IT
IN ON TIME!! SIMPLE AS THAT. GO TO THE PRINCIPAL'S OFFICE NOW!! YOU HAVE DETENTION"

Charles ran out his whole face was red he was trying to hold back his tears from humiliation.
I tried my best to hold in my laughter but it was trying to come out. I breathed in and then put back my straight face.
It was just too funny, seeing that hopeless peasant cry just because I gave him a detention! Weakling! Hahaha!
Anyways! I continued asking for homework's. Sent a couple to the principal's office, not the unusual. I've done this many times.

After homework I then dismissed class as it had already taken up our time we didn't get to move on to the quiz.
I went to the teacher's toilets and changed clothes.
I was leaving when I wanted. I had gotten bored so I went out. In a dress for my date. With my fiance.
I already knew everyone in the school hated me. But I just found them as minor entertainment, dolls just designed to
Do as I please. Well. That's just how I think. It's sickening, isn't it? Haha.
My fiance was going to pay for the meal. So I ordered whatever I wanted. It was the most expensive thing on the menu.
I saw he was nervous because I usual buy pricey things. He knows me, then he goes for the cheapest things when he
Has money! What common sense is that? Money is meant to be spent! What is the point in having something If you won't
Use it properly! He earns a lot! I don't even buy that much maybe just like $6,000 that's small! Ugh!

I had walked out the restaurant to pick up a phone call. It looks like my maid is calling. WHAT DOES THIS WOMAN WANT?
Everyday!! Something always, "Oh your dog ran out the house! Oh you left the oven on! Oh you didn't turn off the lights!"

I answer the phone. She paused before talking. She was whispering? I could barely hear her. I told her to speak up.
It seemed as if she was in a panic...?

To Be Continued...
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  • KatKit
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  • Artisan Skinner
  • August 10, 2018, 7:17 pm
ooh i actually want to read more! <3
  • yolandagirly
  • Level 14
  • Journeyman Cake
  • August 12, 2018, 3:17 am
Thank you KatKit!! That means so much to me.
Hi! So, I have some advice about your writing. Overall, I think the plot is nice, and the overall structure is nice. There are a few things that I do recommend for your future writing, though! As I have been a writer on this platform for a while, I have gathered some experience from writing.

Firstly, I suggest you to not exaggerate too much, as overexaggerating would make it seem overly biased and confusing to the reader. Secondly, try and be a bit more aware of grammar. Certain things can be difficult to understand as a reader. Lastly, I wanna conclude by saying to keep on writing. Your writing has potential, and you can get better at it by doing it more.


I hope it helps! :)

- TheSilentWind.
  • yolandagirly
  • Level 14
  • Journeyman Cake
  • August 12, 2018, 3:17 am
Thank you so much TheSilentWind!

For a while I felt like no one even cared about what I wrote I just wrote for the sake of reading it to myself!
I will use your advice in my next part! Thank you!!
You're welcome!

No no, keep on writing and you will eventually get more readers! We all start from somewhere, and there has to be a point where we are in the need of help and advise. This is how we improve, as we're always in need of improvement, but remember that you will keep on getting better and better by practicing. :)

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