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Finding Ore (a poem)

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Level 30 : Artisan Taco
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My name is kirt

in minecraft i get a lot of dirt.

I search even more

but never see a freaking ore

i'd search all day if i could

but i also have to chop wood

sometimes i see some coal

but then i realize its just a hole

i'd search during the night

but then the zombies would give me a fright

but one day i see something blue

it looks shiny and it's not poo

i look at it and what do i see

water flowing like pee

i guess i'm a noob and i should get back

but wait a second i see something black

Its not diamond but it is an ore

i finally found coal and then i see more!

my first ore is good enough

i feel that my day was not so rough

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  • Psychocrap
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  • Apprentice Miner
  • February 21, 2014, 3:48 am
Nice! Although try not to force yourself to rhyme every line, the choice of words can be awkward
  • [Furq]
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  • Grandmaster Cyborg
  • February 13, 2014, 1:26 am
Nice :D
Thx :D

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