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Fist of Steel - The First Fight

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Hey guys, here's a little background to this story!
We have this supply teacher in our class whose name is Mr, Bond. He is a real joker and we all love him. He makes up nicknames for people, like Bernard (That's Issy's nickname) and I'm Wet/Dry Max because I came in soaking wet one day. But our favourite is Daisy's nickname; Fist of Steel. Whenever Daisy raises her hand, everyone whispers "Fist of Steel, Fist of Steel!" So guess what? Go on, guess. I've got all day. Come on, make your guess! Ok, are you done guessing now? The answer was.. I decided to write a story based around fist of steel! And here it is! So enjoy it! I'll update it alot. 
P.S: Daisy does like her name, I would of thought, in real life!

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This story/book is dedicated to Daisy, and Mr. Bond, may your fist be with you always.

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Daisy stared at herself in her fist. It was ironically make of steel. If and when she raised her fist, people would run and get under cover, whispering "Fist of Steel, Fist of Steel!". She didn't know why her fist was made of steel, she didn't necessarily want a fist made of steel. 
She always saw herself in news reports and newspapers and she wondered why. Everyone is different, but she just has a big fist made of steel. She could punch people if they annoyed her, and that is just about it.
Nobody called her Daisy. They only called her Fist of Steel, just in case she ever lashed out in loath of her real name. She would always stand on top of buildings and pick her next target. Mostly they were news reporters, as they always acted like she was a horrid vigilante! How dare they?
Daisy seems pretty mean, attacking news reporters, but I find it more of payback. 







                                                 
MORE COMING SOON!!!!!!  
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Update #1.1 : by cakeface 11/06/2014 11:42:41 amNov 6th, 2014

This doesn't need an update log but I like looking back on my mistakes

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11/05/2014 1:58 pm
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IceCream_Sundae
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Whose, not "whom's".
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11/06/2014 11:40 am
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cakeface
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Ahh, yes, thank you!
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11/02/2014 8:13 pm
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+snakeonthebus+
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Good start dude! Here's an idea if you want it: Perhaps, she gets a glove eventually to hide the steel hand? Idk . Just a quick idea if you need some inspiration or whatever. lol
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11/05/2014 11:33 am
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cakeface
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Thats a really good idea! Did you get the idea from Frozen? lol, thanks dude!
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11/05/2014 5:21 pm
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+snakeonthebus+
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Lol, no, I didn't but that totally makes sense!
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