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crippling crackles follow me softly.


the deep dark is the only thing that may wait for me now.

like a quick raindrop slicing through thick wind,

i hope to escape the cloudy dangers behind me.


life is so short, so sweet,

so full of dangling opportunities that are difficult for one such as me to reach.

a moment like this comes once every sniff, every blink, every turn.

it is a wonder, a miracle that i am still crawling here.


these evils are always lurking for a meal that always seems to come.

a meal that is prepared by the overseers, wrapped in plump, nude skin

with a layer of soft snow strands dancing on it’s back.

a meal that feels the evil’s satisfaction through bloody fangs and claws


a spot, just one hole is all i’d ever want

in this moment no crunchy carrot, no snuggles from my mother

could ever beat the desire for an opening.

and in all its glory, my desire had been granted.


overseer, give me strength to bounce again once evils leave me ‘lone.

I only wish to have the perseverance my ancestor’s once had.

It seems so easy to stop bouncing.

Just to stop bouncing.


desirable i am.

one plump, snow lined meal i am.

the only plump, snow lined meal in miles, i am.


what would I give just to sit and starve, to never face evils again.

my mother is waiting for me though.

right in our small den, praying for the overseer’s mercy.


i regain my strength and crawl out of safety once more.

the cold evening air was patient, awaiting my arrival.


i am only a lucky one.

with flopped ears, long ears,

as I cut through the trees,

i cannot help but fear the crippling crackles that had followed me.








thank you to my mother and cousin for proof reading this poem !
also, if you couldn't get the gist, this is about a bunny chase.
I wanted to make it only with descriptions, and without the actual animal terms such as fox, wolf, or bunny.
thank you so so so much for reading !
It means a lot to me already that you even clicked on this blog ahaha xD
sending lots if love !! bye bye !
Creditogrelyaggressive, Ghost-Echo, CutieChoco, and puucheii on DeviantArt for bunny pixel arts ! all of the writing was written by me !
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