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Herbrine's Temple - A Minecraft Story - Part 1

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Herobrine's Temple

"I think we lost th-" *CRASH* "AHHHH" Steve looked around... "Welcome, Steve" said a deep eerie voice.

Chapter 1

"Wake up, honey" "W-What time is it?" said Steve. "It's 10:30" said his girlfriend. He gets up and puts on his pants and tee shirt. I gotta go! He grabs his diamond sword, clock, compass, and of course his hat. He opens the door, and the sun burns his eyes, so he puts on his shades. "Hai!" Says Kat, his friend. "Hey, what you doing here?" he asks wonderingly. "Oh, just enjoying the view", and she hands him a book. He opens it and reads what it says... "Steve... I have found temple just out of the border of Gahni and Palai. Get out here, and hurry too. There are patterns on the wall. I need you to translate. So he buys a ticket to the border, and he meets up with him. "Where are the patterns?" He shows Steve. The patterns say, " This is the home of herobrine, all who enter, will be killed... And sent to the nether. Do not enter, or you will face the consequences!"

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05/02/2014 6:12 pm
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Also, remember to credit the person who made the art, or it will be like in your post about plagarism. I don't mean to offend you with this editing I did, I'm just trying to help build up some skills for you.
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05/05/2014 5:16 pm
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Thanks for the help. I'm currently doing a grammical correction program (I'm the only one in it , :P). The program is where I correct people's comments on YouTube (and other networks), so that they can learn more about grammar.  This was made 7 months ago and this program wasn't active. I aprecate the help, and this will help me help other people. Also, I did give credit to the author on the bottom right corner on the picture. www.youtube.com/hypixel.

   -Branden
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05/02/2014 6:11 pm
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"Wake up, honey"
"W-what time is it?" said Steve.
"It's 10:30," replied his girlfriend.
He got up and put on his pants and tee-shirt.
"I gotta go!" He grabbed his diamond sword, clock, compass, and of course, his hat. He opened the door, and the sun borned his eyes, so he put on his shades.
"Hi!" says Kat, his friend.
"Hey, what are you doing here?" He asked wonderingly.
"Oh, just enjoying the view," she said while handing him a book.
He opened it and it stated, "Steve, I have found the temple jyst out of the border of Gahni and Palai. Get out here, and hurry, too. There are patterns on the wall, and I need you to translate."
So, he buys a ticket to the border, and he meets up with him. "Where are the patterns?"
He shows Steve. The patterns say, "This is the home of Herobrine. All who enter will be killed and sent to the Nether. Do not enter, or you will face the consequences!"
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05/02/2014 6:04 pm
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I hope you don't mind, but I think that this needs some grammatical corrections. I'll help you with them, so you can learn a thing or two for the next couple chapters.
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