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LilyBlossom6 avatar LilyBlossom6
Level 52 : Grandmaster Magical Girl
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I stare out my window,
Even though I cannot see her,
I know she is there.

Even if I'm left on read,
Even if she thinks I'm invisible,
I won't appreciate her any less.

Thoughts of other topics swarm outside,
Wanting to get in, file inside.
I keep the door locked extra tight,
I won't let them get me off topic tonight.

I appreciate her, even when she's not there.
It's not romantic in anyway,
I won't bet on it,
But I sure hope she's there to stay.
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02/27/2021 12:20 pm
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Punkamoar
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"I keep the door locked extra tight - I won't let them get me off topic tonight"

That's a fantastic line, I love it
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02/27/2021 12:51 pm
Level 52 : Grandmaster Magical Girl
LilyBlossom6
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Thank you, it means a lot :)
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02/04/2021 11:47 amhistory
Level 28 : Expert Geek
Cardinal System
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I like that this is left open to interpretation. It could your mother, your sister, your best friend, anyone! Nice rhythm, rhyme, and choice of words. +1
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02/04/2021 12:04 pm
Level 52 : Grandmaster Magical Girl
LilyBlossom6
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thank you! :)
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