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It wasn't me- Blog Contest Entry (2nd Place)

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avatar ImaLittleCreeper
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
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This is my entry to 

Mike3779's Blog Contest [V2]!
Hope you liked it! It took a few hours to make, and sacraficial's motivation and tips.

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08/17/2014 4:57 am
Level 36 : Artisan Button Pusher
SleepyDog
Is this one of them 'I woke up' stories? If so I would consider changing the ending, most readers will find a great story ruinend by this, I know I do. 
Anyway geat work!

diamond, subscribe!
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08/17/2014 5:02 am
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
ImaLittleCreeper
Nope, I actually despise those, it's the person waking up after being knocked out by the antagonist, but to leave the mystery of what the antagonist has done/will do.
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08/17/2014 5:11 am
Level 36 : Artisan Button Pusher
SleepyDog
The ending you have used is effective but only in picture stories/films where they can see he is still in the same environment.
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08/17/2014 5:09 am
Level 36 : Artisan Button Pusher
SleepyDog
I believe removing the 'i open my heavy eyes' bit will remove the illusion that this is a dream and allow readers to create there own thoughts of what happend next.
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08/11/2014 4:09 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Architect
Innominate
I think we have similar ideas in writing. As a matter of fact, I can almost never write something that isn't disturbing.
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08/11/2014 4:44 pm
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
ImaLittleCreeper
Hehe, I have writen a somewhat happy story, but the ending was disturbing. I just can't write happy, or at least sad. Only disturbing
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08/11/2014 5:39 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Architect
Innominate
I pretty much go into it blindly, and make it up as I go. From there, it just gets creepy. I've put my stories places, and people have always said: "So... you want this classified as horror?" I'll just say: "Sure, why not."  Hey, at least I don't have any trouble thinking on the spot... or something, I don't know.
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08/11/2014 12:12 am
Level 47 : Master Spider Rider
Mayanaisee
oh ma gawdd d d you left me hanginggg :( whyy
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08/11/2014 12:17 am
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
ImaLittleCreeper
Sorry, try and figure out what can happen next :) I think cliffhangers are fun because of that
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08/11/2014 12:19 am
Level 47 : Master Spider Rider
Mayanaisee
haha i love this blog
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08/11/2014 12:20 am
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
ImaLittleCreeper
Why thank you :)
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08/10/2014 6:08 pm
Level 51 : Grandmaster Prince
Vanillamint
very interesting concept c:
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08/11/2014 12:16 am
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
ImaLittleCreeper
Thanks :)
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08/10/2014 2:38 pm
Level 11 : Journeyman Network
Cheese_Commander
o.o

You are geting 1,000 favorites, 1000 diamonds, all from me. If you don't win Imma be very sad.
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08/11/2014 12:16 am
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
ImaLittleCreeper
Well that's a lot of support, should I call off the helicopter with diamonds then?
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08/11/2014 3:06 pm
Level 11 : Journeyman Network
Cheese_Commander
Wait, what helicopter?! No, let them come and drop the diamonds. They drop diamond bombs which is one diamond that explodes into even more diamonds.
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08/11/2014 4:43 pm
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
ImaLittleCreeper
Need a mod of that nao
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08/11/2014 7:03 pm
Level 11 : Journeyman Network
Cheese_Commander
WE NEED IT NAO MOD DEVELOPERS!
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08/10/2014 2:27 pm
Level 36 : Artisan uwu
VoidPanda
Very nice. BUT GOD WHY CLIFFHANGAR? But it adds drama cx [Yes I know its cliffhanger not cliffhangar]
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08/11/2014 12:15 am
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
ImaLittleCreeper
Cliffhangers are fun :) I like seeing what people think happens next
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08/10/2014 5:20 am
Level 2 : Apprentice Explorer
sacraficial
u smashed it woo
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08/10/2014 5:18 am
Level 31 : Artisan Blockhead
Ashfur4ever
woah..... thats good..... o.o
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08/10/2014 5:19 am
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
ImaLittleCreeper
Thanks, it actually spooked me out while making it, which really surprised me xD
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08/10/2014 5:21 am
Level 31 : Artisan Blockhead
Ashfur4ever
yeah, you would be suprised sometimes storys do that xD
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08/10/2014 5:10 am
Level 25 : Expert Ninja
Guycraft
I died in suspense.
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08/10/2014 5:12 am
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
ImaLittleCreeper
Yay, that's exactly what I was going for!
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