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Memories: A Poem

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Hey guys, CreeperHugger814 here. Yes, I know, I said I wasn't going to post anything on my profile page (as of February 19th, 2016). But hey, here I am with a poem! Not a typical thing for me, but I decided to try it out. 

Just recently my English teacher gave us an assignment to write a poem about where you're from. I previously had a residence in a different state (yes, I live in the United States), and when I recieved the assignment, I nearly had an emotional episode. Here's a poem that I drafted during English. It takes place in the point of view of me when I first moved into the new state.
And here it goes.

Memories

Back then there was a different me
Now there's a new one for all to see
All my thoughts are destined to drown
For I am now the new kid in town.

I am now the target of people who hate
I am now forced to accept my fate
Now I have to survive the day
If I want to have a say.

Long ago it was all fine
I had all those friends of mine
Now I am limited to few
Because of the fact that I am new.

The memories still come back
To try and kill me in an attack
I break down and start to weep
Now I can barely sleep.

Oh, the hatred that I hold
Burning in my heart of gold
I don't want that kind of heart
But I am soon to be ripped apart.

My old school was not that great
But it was not something to hate
It was a place where I constantly learned
I feel as if I'm to be burned.

My thoughts consist of doing suicide
In the place that I currently reside
The flowers in my mind are starting to wilt
For I will be likely be buried in silt.

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My thoughts have now changed
My mind's been rearranged
I am now set straight
This house is just great!

As I roam the upstairs
I cannot believe how it compares
To my previous residence
Oh, how it made perfect sense.

Three months later was the first day of school
I was so excited, I knew there was no rule
Of having fun in a school like this
That was safely secured by confidence.

Three years later and here I stand
In this room that I call my land
Looking over these belongings of mine
I realize where I was when I was nine.

I long of more memories to come and stay
And also to drive my bad thoughts away
Back then there was a different me
Now there's a new one for all to see.


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That's all for this one, folks! I am also working on Darth Creeper: The Dark Side, Part 2! Please leave suggestions in the comments for what you want to see in it!


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Hoooolllllyyyyy crrraaaappp..... IT'S SO GREAT I DUNNO WHAT TO SAYYY...
--I want to be a character.





Name me... Harry (OPTIONAL SURNAME: Adelite)
  • _Phantasm
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  • February 22, 2016, 7:17 am
Thanks for the support!
I might need to close character requests... 3 have already enrolled as characters, but I'll add you as the 4th.
I mean you don't need to do mine, I'm not really that to really want it, of course I want it, but not have ot.
  • Pines
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  • February 21, 2016, 3:13 am
i wanna be a character
  • _Phantasm
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  • Master Creeper Hugger
  • February 21, 2016, 12:38 pm
Then I'll add you to the story. What should your name be in the story?
  • Pines
  • Level 10
  • Journeyman Network
  • February 21, 2016, 10:57 pm
what about: pinington
  • _Phantasm
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  • February 22, 2016, 5:25 am
That'll do. Just be patient, it will take a while to finish.
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  • Master Skinner
  • February 20, 2016, 11:16 am
👍
  • Doctor Mann
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  • Artisan Lava Rider
  • February 19, 2016, 12:26 pm
Could i be a character maybe?

And this poem is really wel made!
  • _Phantasm
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  • February 19, 2016, 5:29 pm
Yeah, you can be a character.

Thanks for the support!

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