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avatar jordanr_66
Level 17 : Journeyman Pokemon
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The world gets created,



The terrain gets rated.



The jungle, The desert anything at all,



You fend for yourself you fight, you brawl.




You survive the first night snug and warm,



Till you wake up the creepers in a swarm.



You kill the first happy as can be,



then the second comes along shhhhhhhh you flee.




You venture down a dark and cold mine,



Trying to get diamond whilst iron is fine.



The coal helps you smelt or cook,



Which helps for the damage the creeper took.




I hope you liked this poem please diamond and subscribe for more minecraft poems. :)



Thank you everyone for an amazing 10 diamonds, Lets go for 20 now! :P



~Jordanr66 :)
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20 replies

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08/09/2013 4:05 pm
Level 41 : Master Wolf
Satoru
I suck at poem's, good job! XD
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08/09/2013 4:09 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Pokemon
jordanr_66
Im not great either ty :D
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05/13/2013 5:22 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Dragon
IsaacDiamond
You spelled desert wrong. Dessert is like the thing you eat after dinner. Desert is the hot sandy thing. Just thought you might want that clarified. And you probably meant snug, not snog?
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05/13/2013 5:29 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Pokemon
jordanr_66
hahah sorry man ty for pointing it out though will edit asap :) otherwise did u like it
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05/13/2013 5:30 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Dragon
IsaacDiamond
Other than that, it's great
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05/13/2013 5:32 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Pokemon
jordanr_66
ty man :)
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05/02/2013 5:32 pm
Level 11 : Journeyman Scribe
Ranger99
Cool poem!
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05/10/2013 12:17 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Pokemon
jordanr_66
Thank you !! :)
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04/24/2013 10:06 am
Level 26 : Expert Artist
riverius
Nice work i like minecraft poems on pmc i always read them. I also made one myzelf about the enderdragon fight plz read it and hope you liked it.
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04/24/2013 12:35 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Pokemon
jordanr_66
i will and thanks for the comment :)
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04/24/2013 12:36 pm
Level 26 : Expert Artist
riverius
no thanks youre epic its a nice poem and thank you that you wanted to read it. feel free to comment subscribe or just send me a messege thanks.
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04/23/2013 5:28 pm
Level 42 : Master Wolf Whisperer
ImaLittleCreeper
Wow I was about to comment is was like Night Mob poem and that you took that idea then I looked at more blogs -_-
1
03/28/2013 9:32 pm
Level 18 : Journeyman Ninja
Spophie02
will you subscribe to me?
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03/28/2013 9:33 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Pokemon
jordanr_66
yes any thing to help out :)
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03/28/2013 9:31 pm
Level 18 : Journeyman Ninja
Spophie02
Dont worry you havent seen the rest
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03/28/2013 9:25 pm
Level 18 : Journeyman Ninja
Spophie02
I really couldent do better
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03/28/2013 9:27 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Pokemon
jordanr_66
thanks a million :)
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03/28/2013 9:20 pm
Level 18 : Journeyman Ninja
Spophie02
Nice, i havent heard anything better
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03/28/2013 9:22 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Pokemon
jordanr_66
thanks also for diamond i will make more asap :)
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03/28/2013 9:19 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Pokemon
jordanr_66
please guys tell me what you think of this poem

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