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Mists in the Night... [HORROR]

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Info Before you read :
Main : Taylor
Kinda Main : Bobby, Alex

The Story Begins....
Taylor was doing her usual.. doing homework... On the computer.... but she got a package from an anonymous... she wasn't bothered to open it so she gave it to Bobby (Her Brother). Bobby was more then glad to take it.. Her Mother shouted "TAYLOR GET DOWN HERE AND EAT YA CABBAGE" Taylor yelled back " Yes Mom." She went done to notice that her mother had invited her friend Alex to stay over. They both ate dinner silently.

They both wondered where Bobby was.. she looked in his room, all she saw was the open package, she was confused.. They went back down and saw a documentary on the television.. New Reporter : "People randomly murdered by what was seemed to be nothing?" The news reporter questioned the neighbors "Did you hear a scream or anything from your neighbors?" The neighbors said "No we didn't.. All we heard was this weird crunch. We think it was our dog eating his bone." Taylor gasped, Alex needed to go to the restroom, so Taylor guided her. Alex felt scared, she had never heard such a horrifying story on the news. She done her business and went down the stairs... Safely. Taylor wanted to scare Alex, so she hid in the closet and waited for her.. When Alex finally got down, Taylor jumped out to scare her "BLAHH!" But Alex wasn't scared of her, she saw these strange mists behind Taylor.. She asked "Taylor, h-has there b-been dust in t-there?" Taylor Replied " No silly, its probably your imagination.." Alex investigated and looked in the closet. Cheeky Taylor slammed the door behind Alex and ran.. Alex was horrified. She felt the mist tickle her.. And touch her. She tried to open the door, it didn't budge.. So she screamed to Taylor "TAYLOR! Get me out!" Taylor forgot about her and went to watch television.

Alex saw random shapes. The door opened.. But something was carrying her. She got pulled outside into the bushes.. Taylor thought it was her mother, taking out the trash. Taylor went to see what Bobby was doing.. She checked his room, he was there, so she said "Bobby, your dinner is cold! Go eat it!" Bobby didn't respond.. So Taylor slapped him in the face to get his attention. Bobby went downstairs being silent, Taylor assumed that he was going to eat dinner. She went to the Kitchen to grab a drink, but the sight she saw was Horrifying! She saw her mother, Frozen in the fridge.. She had a panic-attack. She remembered Alex, she opened the closet and saw nothing. No mist or anything.. She looked out the window..

SCREACH!! She saw Alex with Bright Yellow eyes, and blood crawling from her mouth.. Taylor ran to her room and tried to sleep "This is all just a nightmare.." She said.. But when she hopped in, she wasn't alone.. She saw Bobby, with a pale face..Bright yellow eyes like Alex and a big, deep scratch across his arm.. Taylor rubbed his arm, thinking it was a cheeky trick, but just his blood brushed into her hand. She ran outside to see a package..

She saw the package and opened it.. She felt a rustle of wind going through her hair. She looked behind her to see a Black Mist, looking like the picture on the television.

The mist strangled her and punched her multiple times.. she thought "This is just a nightmare.. A dream! I can think it to go away" She thought of happiness and peace. But then she felt something behind her touching her..Then she saw it was.. Alex...

Alex pulled her to the floor and tried to kill her.. The crunching sounds came, she saw Bobby sprinting down the stairs.. and just at that second, she saw a policeman doing a night check.. The policeman shot both, Bobby and Alex in the head, and carried Taylor to the hospital, Taylor had multiple wounds. She was loosing alot of blood and soon after she died..

Whenever you see a package, you hear her whispers, screaches... and for Alex and Bobby, there screams are to be heard in bushes, the whistles in the night...
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06/21/2013 8:52 am
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O_O good job on making this, SUPAH DUPAH POLICEMAN SAVED TEH DAY WITH... HIS SUPAH DUPAH SIX SHOOTER!
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