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Level 22 : Expert Engineer
I'm taking a grammer class so for my assignment i wrote about minecraft! :D. i got 94 out of 100 so i decided to post here. hope you enjoy :)

Searching for the most prized object in the video game (minecraft), I

had been digging every day in an ancient abandoned mineshaft for the

past week. On the eighth day of mining, I started out, like every other

day, by exploring new parts of my mine. After an hour of looking, I

came upon a lava pool. As I was looking for a way to get around the

lava, a diamond, resting on the edge of the pool, caught my eye. Its

stunning gleam was like the sun, shining luminously. My quest was

finished, but I still had to build a bridge to the diamond and mine it.

Once these tasks were completed, I lept off my chair for joy, suddenly,

I heard a hissing noise and icy shiver went down my back. The only

creature that makes that sound is a creeper ( a freighting green

creature that when near you explodes). Scared and worried of dying I

jumped stupidly into the lava losing all my items and tools that I had

collected. Luckily, no one was watching me, as my cheeks became red

with anger at the evil creeper. Since then, I have learned not to be

scared of scary creepers, and searching for valuable diamonds

continues to be my quest.

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  • redemobands
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  • March 20, 2013, 5:05 am
nice :D

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