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My Wolf (A Minecraft Poem)

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avatar BuhBuckyBoe
Level 5 : Apprentice Artist
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My Wolf
By BuhBuckyBoe

Me and my grey, furry friend

Loved each other to the end.

We hunted down mobs together

And tried to stop them from spawning forever.


But then one terrible night;

There were too many mobs to fight

and using all of our might

we tried to rid them from our sight.
 

I slayed monster after monster

But I was still outnumbered.

I became so weary

And I couldn’t fight any longer.


My wolf saved the day

But bloody and lifeless he laid.

For he sacrificed himself

So I wouldn’t lose anymore health.


R.I.P. My Wolf
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13 replies

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01/03/2015 7:44 pm
Level 45 : Master Architect
JordanCO_TV
*Sniff* *Sniff* Great job
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04/06/2015 9:58 pm
Level 5 : Apprentice Artist
BuhBuckyBoe
Thanks Jordan.
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03/06/2014 5:14 pm
Level 18 : Journeyman Taco
bubba_nate
Wolves should respawn, perhaps at a price, but they should respawn. I keep mine in my house sitting down so he isn't in danger and I freak out and set it to peaceful when he comes out because he sat up. I also am very careful not to push him against walls too hard.
I usually play with Doggy Talents but it's outdated now, it made your dog just be incapacitated and not able to lose more health or do anything but follow you and be able to be healed.
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03/07/2014 5:08 pm
Level 5 : Apprentice Artist
BuhBuckyBoe
It's too bad that Doggy Talents never updated.
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03/04/2014 8:29 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Geek
Skullduggerycain
Bravo!
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03/04/2014 9:18 pm
Level 5 : Apprentice Artist
BuhBuckyBoe
Thank you! If you think that this poem is wonderful, I should consider writing another one. If I write another one, do you have any requests or ideas on what it will be about?
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03/05/2014 8:09 am
Level 33 : Artisan Geek
Skullduggerycain
Honestly. your style is great as it is, and I appreciate the fact that you, unlike others who try to write a minecraft poem, actually bothered to lay it out and have it flow, instead of having it all jumbled together. Just one thing I noticed was in some lines the syllables sounded a little off, but other than that, really nice job!
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03/05/2014 7:34 pm
Level 5 : Apprentice Artist
BuhBuckyBoe
I want to thank you for your feedback. I will consider creating a better flow within the syllables of my next poem. I will also try to fix it in this poem.
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03/05/2014 8:24 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Geek
Skullduggerycain
Well, thank you for listening to my constructive criticism. A lot of internet authors these days will automatically assume the person is hating on them, and not listen to what they have to say. Congrats! You're more mature than 60% of PMC!
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03/05/2014 5:42 pm
Level 5 : Apprentice Artist
BuhBuckyBoe
While I was writing it, I tried to make sure that this poem had the elements of a poem but that didn't end well. I had to scrap my writing several times and I became frustrated. It didn't help that "poems" were on the pop-reel by using rhyme without other elements. Frustrated, I slapped this together (with effort nevertheless) and called it a poem.
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03/05/2014 5:46 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Geek
Skullduggerycain
Well then, color me impressed.
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03/05/2014 5:56 pm
Level 5 : Apprentice Artist
BuhBuckyBoe
What do you mean?

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