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avatar Darkrai48
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Skinner
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"New save"

I start a new save on Minecraft one day,
I open it up, and sit down to play.
The clouds are drifting slowly along,
The game is playing its usual song,

I get up from the ground to look around spawn,
I start at the trees, and soon they're all gone.
With planks in my hand, I build a small hut,
Add on a door, and make sure it's shut.

The sun sinks low as I go inside,
Away from the monsters of the night I will hide.
When the sun rises, I go to explore,
This is a new save, I know I'll adore.


How was that, did you like it? It's just a small thing I made for my creative writing class. I'm really happy with how it came out, so I decided to upload it here for you lovely people.
Enjoy!

~Darkrai48

49 replies

1
08/13/2015 8:08 pm
Level 67 : High Grandmaster Explorer
Beverly
That's cute! I love it! :D
1
04/14/2013 6:14 am
Level 32 : Artisan Spelunker
flamingZ
Epic! I know I did not do a music video, but I can't now anyways but still both are EPIC!
1
04/14/2013 10:38 am
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Skinner
Darkrai48
Lol thanks :P
1
03/29/2013 10:08 am
Level 14 : Journeyman Pokemon
Psyckotic
Nice job Dark, didn't know you could write too :)
1
03/29/2013 9:00 am
Level 19 : Journeyman Archer
snowman oath
Sonnet.
Must have a taken you awhile.
Great job!:D
1
03/29/2013 5:56 am
Level 80 : Elite Artist
StormCoreFilms
Nice one!
1
03/29/2013 1:29 am
Level 33 : Artisan Geek
Skullduggerycain
Wow! Great job on this! I'm a bit of a poet myself, and I loved how you made the words flow, put in the effort to make them rhyme, and most of all - have them make sense! Also, you professionally put the poem into stanzas! Good job! *Diamond*
1
03/29/2013 11:02 am
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Skinner
Darkrai48
Thank you! that's really nice!
1
03/29/2013 2:32 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Geek
Skullduggerycain
No problem, it's true!
1
03/28/2013 11:40 pm
Level 6 : Apprentice Crafter
Killllllller10111
Epic... I would never think of those rymes
1
03/28/2013 10:33 pm
Level 55 : Grandmaster Baconator
coolkevin867
50th diamond :D Nice work!
1
03/28/2013 8:59 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Pokemon
jordanr_66
diamond for good work :)
1
03/28/2013 7:27 pm
Level 29 : Expert Skinner
SolidTheSoldier
Awesome, sorta how I feel when starting a new world
1
03/28/2013 9:22 pm
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Skinner
Darkrai48
Yeah ikr?
1
03/28/2013 5:31 pm
Level 16 : Journeyman Pony
drakath9
Nice poem!!
1
03/28/2013 4:55 pm
Level 9 : Apprentice Ninja
jake_the_ace123
Very nice poem!
1
03/28/2013 4:53 pm
Level 18 : Journeyman Prince
Nandos
Very nice poem ^-^
1
03/28/2013 6:04 pm
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Skinner
Darkrai48
Oh thanks Seany :D
1
03/28/2013 4:20 pm
Level 27 : Expert Dragonborn
TheBullShcitt
THIS SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!

Now that I got your attention, that was an amazing and creative poem. C:
1
03/28/2013 4:24 pm
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Skinner
Darkrai48
*Slow clap* O___________O
1
03/28/2013 3:17 pm
Level 25 : Expert Artist
riverius
POEMS ON PMC are always awesome.
1
03/28/2013 1:13 pm
Level 13 : Journeyman Pokemon
BAAACON LOVER
epic
1
03/28/2013 5:36 am
Level 52 : Grandmaster Lad
Noobator
Amazing Darkrai48!
1
03/28/2013 2:27 am
Level 15 : Journeyman Skinner
Kaduu
Nice. :D
1
03/27/2013 11:48 pm
Level 45 : Master Archer
planet no life
good work, i like it :)
1
03/27/2013 10:18 pm
Level 23 : Expert Skinner
DogsRNice
30th diamond :) nice story
1
03/27/2013 10:13 pm
Level 13 : Journeyman Architect
Coolio_Joe
I Love It
1
03/27/2013 7:43 pm
Level 16 : Journeyman Taco
maxster98
Now this is pure minecraft poetry.
1
03/27/2013 9:15 pm
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Skinner
Darkrai48
Thank you my friend.
1
03/27/2013 10:35 pm
Level 16 : Journeyman Taco
maxster98
No problem, I just like seeing minecrafters coming up with new things.
1
03/27/2013 7:42 pm
Level 9 : Apprentice Mage
eamc5
Awesome
1
03/27/2013 7:38 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Ranger
VelociCraftor
Wonderful!
1
03/27/2013 6:39 pm
Level 27 : Expert Scribe
_DioM_
Finally! Another PMC poet!
1
03/27/2013 6:41 pm
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Skinner
Darkrai48
Oh I don't do poetry a whole lot, just whenever I have to write a poem ^u^ xD
1
03/27/2013 6:44 pm
Level 27 : Expert Scribe
_DioM_
But still, I've seen very few poems around the place.
1
03/27/2013 5:31 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Grump
noobuscus
great poem ;D I didn't know u did poetry ;P
1
03/27/2013 4:28 pm
Level 9 : Apprentice Mage
benjy68
I love this poem!
1
03/27/2013 1:46 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Droid
Krisnater12345
Very good! diamond for your poems!
1
03/27/2013 6:54 am
Level 29 : Expert Dragonborn
ObsidianMinerMan
:o nice!
1
03/26/2013 8:04 pm
Level 48 : Master Pirate
SquishyZaUltra
Wow, that's really good. xD I like it a lot!

--Squishy <3
1
03/26/2013 9:10 pm
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Skinner
Darkrai48
Oh thanks Squishy! <3 <3 <3
1
03/26/2013 10:02 pm
Level 48 : Master Pirate
SquishyZaUltra
No prob! ;3
1
03/26/2013 7:53 pm
Level 27 : Expert Taco
VthX_Zenith
Awesome. :D
1
03/26/2013 7:38 pm
Level 35 : Artisan Skinner
terreen
I wouldn't say I'm lovely.... But okeh <3
Nice as always!
1
03/26/2013 7:03 pm
Level 43 : Master Poro
DinoWolf
Awesome as always. X3 Hey can I request a skin? c:
1
03/26/2013 9:14 pm
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Skinner
Darkrai48
Thank you! :D But I already have 9 skins to make for episode 2 of "The great escape" on youtube, but once I finish with those, which shouldn't be too awfully long, I'll start taking requests again, okay? :3
1
03/26/2013 9:14 pm
Level 43 : Master Poro
DinoWolf
Mmkay. X3
1
03/26/2013 7:02 pm
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
Rainori
sweet ^^
1
03/26/2013 7:00 pm
Level 57 : Grandmaster Unicorn
CuteMurphy
I like it

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