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Not Going My Way | TheSilentWind

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Level 41 : Master Enderdragon
When everything doesn't go your way,
Losing more than you've had day by day.
When you thought the worst has already happened,
But it gets worse and you don't know if it has or hasn't.

I'll stop asking for more if I get back what I've had,
Even a hint of change will make me glad.
I'm so confused as to why this is happening to me,
Every direction I turn, the mist is all that I can see.

Free me, let me think clearly.
Free me, let me be happy.
Free me, let me be able to see.
Free me, let me be the happy person I used to be.

What: What should I do?
Where: Where will this take me to?
When: When will it get better and when will my tears cease to drip?
Why: Why am I on a path of on a seemingly hopeless trip?

As if this hasn't happened before,
But why do I always cry on the floor?
Things always get better and I've always been fine,
But not when I can't think properly in my mind.

Will I, like before, get back what I have?
Or shall I be lost on a dark hopeless path?
What will become of me now?
Will the tables turn somehow?

Please read: Why I have put this as "other" rather than as a story and what the poem is based on
First of all, I don't see this as a story. I see this as a poem describing the thoughts of a person. Second of all, it is inspired this week overall. Things are just not going my way. I've lost some things. One including my views. I write because I want to spread the message of something, to express emotions and turn them into a form of art (writing), or to describe the different perspectives of people. Writing can show you many perspectives of how people can think. One perspective can affect how someone behaves and reacts to things. Don't get me wrong, I'm not desperate, but I'm just confused as to why my views dropped from 400-600 views as average to 100. Other things I've lost includes a friend who had recently moved to a different place, my school work, and finally, a project that I've been working on that I fear to lose permanently (I still have it, but there are some issues that I can't figure out yet). I'm not lost in darkness as I've described in this poem. I just like to give experiences of things and change it up as well as make it sound more dramatic/deep to be a good poem. Most of this poem isn't true, aside from things not going my way and unsure of when it's getting better.

Although remember this: If things aren't going your way, remember that it's going to be a thing of the past soon. As I've written on the poem, it may feel like it will never get better, but it always has and it most likely will.

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Let me add on as to why I write and upload it as content. I want my writing to spread a message, inspire others (whether it is to inspire them to make other forms of art, yes, writing is art, and/or to inspire them to view something differently.)

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