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I don't wish to explain this poem, take it for what it is :)
Also I quickly put together the thumbnail
Tell me what you think or what you believe it to be about if you want ^_^


Assigned by angels to be the vessel
of your opal eyes

I don't mind

These days all I want to see
is the radiance you bring to these days
a tranquil break in the folds
streaming through me

As I stand in regard
with the threads of yours wrapped around mine
a spatial interlude
long glimpses at your blueprints
in my sights
the daybreak of my existence
the gleaming brilliance of yellow
the daring cosmos of nights’ sky
Those night skies

its expanse I clear with no expense
I only hope for you
for you to notice
the bones of mine that bloom after you
a synthesis so sweet
as I see you
glance back to me as we dance across this field
as I tread light
a nimbus and a kite

the vessel of your opal eyes
a contract laced with gold
dusted with your breath.
Credityer mom
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05/09/2017 10:37 am
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Havingfun_ISKEY
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Where did you learn to write like that? It's quite good!
05/09/2017 11:49 am
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05/10/2017 1:15 pm
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Songs are definitely the best inspiration for writing, good for you :)

You're welcome. =) Keep up the good work! I hope to see more in the future. Congrats on third place in the blog contest too!
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05/10/2017 7:16 pm
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You continue with this sort of stuff, I bet they will. ;)
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05/09/2017 1:10 am
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edgy
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05/09/2017 12:11 pm
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<3
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05/08/2017 8:07 pm
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sounds kinda psychedelic... :)
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05/08/2017 2:39 pm
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