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Published Feb 4th, 2/4/21 10:05 am
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CaraRose avatar CaraRose
Level 55 : Grandmaster Princess
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Hi loves! It is nice to see you here.
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I would love to entry the Love Poetry Contest with a poetry which became a song eventually

Don't worry I know music and pictures
are not important in this contest :)
However, I still see this as a great opportunity to share demo version of the song I'm planning to release in new album
♡ ♡ ♡

Paper Souls_I wrote this song a while ago for a man I cared about so much._
______Unfortunately, he decided to leave me heartbroken...______
__But now I know, God sent him into my life just for this song.___		Paper Souls


Text version, if you need


You can listen to the song here: https://youtu.be/gsuVqirMEBU

The cover is my painting, I took this photo under the sunlight from my window


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02/27/2021 12:18 pm
Level 53 : Grandmaster Musician
Punkamoar
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...wow, that's good stuff
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02/27/2021 1:12 pm
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CaraRose
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Thank you! ♡
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02/06/2021 6:02 am
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Hardcrafter
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Much like your song-writing for the windswept album, this is very mature. I love this since there's a huge separation between the raw emotion on display here compared to some people just writing poems about their toasters or some other relatively unimportant things for this contest.

I genuinely hope this poem gets top 3!

I know the song is still a demo, but I feel like I should share that your voice gets drowned out by the instrumental. In my opinion at least, the vocals don't come out as clear as they could be.
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02/06/2021 6:37 am
Level 55 : Grandmaster Princess
CaraRose
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thank you so much for your opinion! I appreciate it ♡

You think I should make it louder? And where exactly? :)
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02/06/2021 7:34 am
Level 35 : Artisan Wolf
Hardcrafter
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I'd say the piano should be a bit further in the background, right now I feel it's overpowering the rest of the elements in the mix.

Honestly, the vocals seem a bit too quiet throughout the entire song. I know I personally had to listen really closely to catch what was being sung.
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02/06/2021 8:48 am
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CaraRose
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alright, thanks for advice ^^
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02/06/2021 10:52 amhistory
Level 35 : Artisan Wolf
Hardcrafter
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Of course, it is your song so as long as you think it sounds good in your own ears that's the main thing.

Besides, I'm only an amateur myself when it comes to music production and mixing.
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02/05/2021 6:25 am
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Overlord_Aqua_2
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It makes me sad for some reason. Overall, it's amazing! :')
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02/05/2021 7:53 am
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CaraRose
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thank you! ♡
yeah it is kinda sad but it is full of hope and love
at least this is how I feel it ^^
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02/04/2021 11:54 am
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Cardinal System
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I like the imagery and symbolism. +1
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02/04/2021 12:38 pm
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CaraRose
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thank you! ♡
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02/04/2021 10:38 am
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Ansidium
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I think I just died inside...
in a good way I mean :)
this is SO PERFECT!
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02/04/2021 10:38 amhistory
Level 55 : Grandmaster Princess
CaraRose
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thank you! ♡
I loved your poem too!
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02/04/2021 10:29 am
Level 36 : Artisan Magical Girl
JadeFire170
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This is absolutely beautiful...
I love this so much.

Amazing job. <3
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02/04/2021 10:33 am
Level 55 : Grandmaster Princess
CaraRose
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aw thank you! ♡
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