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Past is the key

Updated on May 21st, 2012, 5/21/12 2:57 pm | 1 logs
Published Apr 22nd, 2012, 4/22/12 4:24 pm
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Zedeik's Avatar Zedeik
Level 22 : Expert Spelunker
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I made this poem after i went to do the groceries.. What i'll say below, has really happened.
So, here's how it goes:

My past is filled;

Filled with mistakes;

Filled with pain.


I don't know what i should do;

I wish i could go back;

To change these mistakes;

To change this hatred i feel;

When i cross the street.


People's looking at me;

With fire eyes;

Saying: Look at this piece of shit.


I'll show them;

I'm not that common guy;

I can be like superman;

And reverse what the world;

Is thinking of me.


Reverse that hate and make it love.
CreditMy haters, Love you guys! :D
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Update #1 : by Zedeik 05/21/2012 2:57:54 pmMay 21st, 2012

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09/05/2013 2:50 am
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Omg this really happened??!!! I hate people who r mean like that and this poem is another awesome one (sorry for comments on your other posts with the word awesome I just like the word). But those people who called u that were just saying that cause they r wut they called u, u r Awesome ï¼ o §o o ¦ï¼
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09/05/2013 5:44 pm
Level 22 : Expert Spelunker
Zedeik
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Well, thank you.

I too find my poems 'good'.
But i don't like how i never get to make what i want to say rhyme.. (That sentence was a bit weird to my eyes..)
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