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avatar SpowzyThePoet
Level 40 : Master Mlem Mlem Bat
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A trip to the pumpkin patch,
seemed to be a fun trip for Cindy
(a blonde, thin young lady that loves
nature and car rides).

The car's engine roared
over the rocky trail.
The car reached to a stop
in the middle of the patch.

Cindy opened the car door,
stepping into the grass, below.
A sound of a ripple cutting the leaf,
made the spirits aware someone was near.

It was peaceful, until she heard
a faint whisper in her ear.
"Get out of here! The spirits will come!"
with a sense of confusion in her mind.

She ignored it, picking up a pumpkin,
it spun around, like it was animated.
Facing Cindy, carving a grin,
a sense of fear filled her mind.

She threw it out of her sight,
the feeling of the spirits becoming angry.
They laughed, they taunted, they scratched,
she ran to her car, weak.

The pumpkin bit her ankles, whole,
blood gushing out, pain striking her nerves.
She didn't know what to do as she laid on the grass,
as the pumpkins devoured her body.

Her lifeless body sank into the grass,
with her car, beside here, sinking into the abyss.
There wasn't a trace of evidence
that she was alive or dead, but missing.
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11/02/2015 10:28 am
Level 9 : Apprentice Network
WhoIsThis
It did not rhyme, but that IS nicely written! You have a good sense of poem writing! And I write poems too, wanna check them out?
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11/02/2015 10:35 am
Level 40 : Master Mlem Mlem Bat
SpowzyThePoet
its a freestyle poem, that means there are no rules so you dont have to make a poem have rhymes...but ill check em out ^3^ im sure ill love em
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11/03/2015 5:07 am
Level 9 : Apprentice Network
WhoIsThis
Yeah, but I don't love freestyle poems (I don't want to be rude) but this poem even though being it, still gives a lot of meaning.
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11/03/2015 8:07 am
Level 40 : Master Mlem Mlem Bat
SpowzyThePoet
Yeah, i guess people have different likings....i did like rhyming poetry but once i got into freestyle....its all im ever popping out
1
11/01/2015 9:37 pm
Level 28 : Expert Toast
redfox_pw
Plot twist!
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11/01/2015 10:04 pm
Level 40 : Master Mlem Mlem Bat
SpowzyThePoet
x3 hehe

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